I have made some improvment.can you give me any correction? Self-introduction Good afternoon, I am glad to be here. My name is Zengtefei, I am a senior from Chang’an University, I major in Chemical Engineering. By the way, I like English Language as much as Chemistry. Fortunately, I have found my first job at HONDA due to my qualifications.. By and large, I am an easy-going person and I enjoy communicating with people. I like to make friends and in fact I do have many friends. Besides, I am quite active and energetic. and I don’t like leaving things half done; When I have a project to do, I do it thoroughly and on time. In addition, I am organized; I have many duties when I am the Monitor, so I organize a schedule and prioritize my jobs. Finally I was awarded with the title of Outstanding League Member. In my spare time, I enjoy music, sports, especially basketball, and studying the English language. As for study, I'm a fast learner I didn't know anything about computers before attending a University. It was difficult at first but I studied hard, got high marks and can use it effectively now. I always believe that one can too easily lag behind unless one keeps on learning. In order to improve my English, I often go to English Corner to practice my oral English. I have passed College English Test, Band Six with high marks. However, I know my English has room for improvement. I will continue studying for leisure. Thanks for your attention!

Self-introduction for BEC Vantage Test,Can you help improve it ? Good afternoon, I am glad to be here, First ,let me briefly introduce myself. My name is Zengtefei, I come from Hunnang, I major in Chemical Engineering. However I like English Language as much as Chemistry. Fortunately, I have found my first job at HONDA due to my qualifications.. In my spare time, I enjoy music, sports, especially basketball, and studying the English language. By and large, I am an easy-going person and I enjoy communicating with people. I like to make friends and in fact I have many friends. Besides, I am quite active and energetic. and I don’t like leaving things half done; When I have a project to do, I do it thoroughly and on time. In addition, I am organized; I have many duties when I am the Monitor, so I organize a schedule and prioritize my jobs. Finally I was awarded with the title of Outstanding League Member. As for study, I'm a fast learner I didn't know anything about computers before attending a University. It was difficult at first but I studied hard, got high marks and can use it effectively now. I always believe that one can too easily lag behind unless one keeps on learning. In order to improve my English, I often go to English Corner to practice my oral English. I have passed College English Test, Band Six with high marks. Just like passing an exam, I believe that problems are really challenges and that I can solve them. However, I know my English has room for improvement. I will continue studying for leisure. Thanks for your attention!

A problem of great urgency!(B As for why I choose to engage in postgraduate study, there are several reasons as follow .First of all, I have a profound love in my major, which is very practical and useful. Through four years study in university I find the knowledge I have mastered is not enough to solve some specific problems .Secondly, I can broaden my horizon and enrich the knowledge in this field through the postgraduate education. Thirdly, now the employment situation is serious. Maybe through postgraduate study, I could achieve a better position. As for my choice of universities, I should say I love this university very much. When I came here for the first time I was deeply impressed by the academic atmosphere and the faculty. In addition, Tianjin University enjoys a good reputation in this field. If I am lucky enough to get the chance, I will devote all myself to my major and focus all of my energy on it. That’s all. Thank you!

I am searching for help to correct my friend's self-introduction draft.a problem of great urgency!(A Self-introduction Good morning, my dear teachers and professors. It’s really a great honor to have this opportunity for an interview. I hope I can make a good performance today. First, let me introduce myself briefly. My name is Guo yan. I am 20 years old, born in Inner Monglia. My undergraduate period will be accomplished in Chang’an university in july,2011. My major is Chemical Engineering and I have completed Inorganic Chemistry ,Organic Chemistry, Analytical Chemistry and Physical Chemistry .I have worked hard at my major subject .I am one of the top student in my class. In order to improve my English and master fundamental knowledge of computer application, I have passed College English Test, Band Six, and the C language examination in the National computer Rank Examination Level2 . I always believe that one will easily lag behind unless he keeps on learning. The scholarships I have won during these years can certificate that I worked hard. I am quite active and energetic .I approach things enthusiastically and I don’t like leaving things half done. It makes me nervous .I can’t concentrate on something else until the first thing is finished .I'm efficient; Time is money and efficiency is life. when I have a project to do, I do it thoroughly and on time. For example, I always double-check my reports. I like to be organized; I had many duties when I am the League secretary of my class, so I organized a schedule and prioritized my jobs. I'm a fast learner； I didn't know anything about computers before university, it was difficult at first but I studied hard, got high marks and can use it effectively now…. I believe that problems are really challenges and that I can solve them. In my spare time , I enjoy sports, music, especially classical music, and English. I often go to English corner to practice my oral English .but I know my English is not good enough ,I will continue studying. ^^^^^^^to be continued^^^^^^^^^

Tell you something about me and search for help It’s been a very long time since my last diary. I am sorry for the friends ,who always pay attention to me. I’ve been busy these days. I am senior now, so I have to think about what my career will be, and then try my best to find a good job in that area. There is another problem I want to search help from you all, my dear friends. One of my close friends, Yan, she has been admitted to one of the most famous universities in China for her postgraduate study ,and she has to prepare for an impressive interview .she has to make an introduction of herself in English. But her English is not good enough , she wants to make a good impression to professors, and I really want to do her a favor. I will prepare the interview essay as soon as possible, maybe tomorrow or the day after tomorrow or even a little longer, because I want to make it perfect . Then I will make it public in my diary book. I sincerely hope that there will be some friends help to correct it ,edit it ,and give their opinions on it ,finally make it impressive. because time is limited ,I am afraid that some friends will miss it or help me too late, I sincerely hope that anyone who really wants to do me a favor, please do write down your email address ,and I will send my essay to you for correcting . I look forward to hear from you. That’s all. best wishes!