I am searching for help to correct my friend's self-introduction draft.a problem of great urgency!(A
Self-introduction
Good morning, my dear teachers and professors. It’s really a great honor to have this opportunity for an interview. I hope I can make a good performance today.
First, let me introduce myself briefly. My name is Guo yan. I am 20 years old, born in Inner Monglia. My undergraduate period will be accomplished in Chang’an university in july,2011. My major is Chemical Engineering and I have completed Inorganic Chemistry ,Organic Chemistry, Analytical Chemistry and Physical Chemistry .I have worked hard at my major subject .I am one of the top student in my class. In order to improve my English and master fundamental knowledge of computer application, I have passed College English Test, Band Six, and the C language examination in the National computer Rank Examination Level2 . I always believe that one will easily lag behind unless he keeps on learning. The scholarships I have won during these years can certificate that I worked hard.
I am quite active and energetic .I approach things enthusiastically and I don’t like leaving things half done. It makes me nervous .I can’t concentrate on something else until the first thing is finished .I'm efficient; Time is money and efficiency is life. when I have a project to do, I do it thoroughly and on time. For example, I always double-check my reports. I like to be organized; I had many duties when I am the League secretary of my class, so I organized a schedule and prioritized my jobs. I'm a fast learner; I didn't know anything about computers before university, it was difficult at first but I studied hard, got high marks and can use it effectively now…. I believe that problems are really challenges and that I can solve them.
In my spare time , I enjoy sports, music, especially classical music, and English. I often go to English corner to practice my oral English .but I know my English is not good enough ,I will continue studying.
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I am searching for help to correct my friend's self-introduction draft.a problem of great urgency!(A
Self-introductionGood morning, my dear teachers and professors. It’s really a great honor to have this opportunity for an interview. I hope I can make a good impression today.
First, let me briefly introduce myself
I am quite active and energetic. I approach things enthusiastically and I don’t like leaving things half done. It makes me nervous. I can’t concentrate on something else until the first thing is finished. I'm efficient; time is money and efficiency is life. When I have a project to do, I do it thoroughly and on time. For example, I always double-check my reports. I like to be organized; I had many duties when I was the League secretary of my class, so I organized a schedule and prioritized my jobs. I'm a fast learner; I didn't know anything about computers before university, it was difficult at first but I studied hard, got high marks and can use them effectively now…. I believe that problems are really challenges and that I can solve them.
In my spare time , I enjoy sports, music, especially classical music, and English. I often go to English corner to practice my oral English, but I know my English is not good enough. I will continue studying.
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