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A problem of great urgency!(B As for why I choose to engage in postgraduate study, there are several reasons as follow .First of all, I have a profound love in my major, which is very practical and useful. Through four years study in university I find the knowledge I have mastered is not enough to solve some specific problems .Secondly, I can broaden my horizon and enrich the knowledge in this field through the postgraduate education. Thirdly, now the employment situation is serious. Maybe through postgraduate study, I could achieve a better position. As for my choice of universities, I should say I love this university very much. When I came here for the first time I was deeply impressed by the academic atmosphere and the faculty. In addition, Tianjin University enjoys a good reputation in this field. If I am lucky enough to get the chance, I will devote all myself to my major and focus all of my energy on it. That’s all. Thank you!

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A problem of great urgency!(B

As for why I choose to engage in postgraduate study, there are several reasons as follows. First of all, I have a profound love in my major, which is very practical and useful. Through four years study in university I have found that the knowledge I have mastered is not enough to solve some specific problems.  Secondly, I can broaden my horizon and enrich the knowledge in this field through the postgraduate education. Thirdly, now the employment situation is serious. Maybe through postgraduate study, I could achieve a better position. (perhaps make the sentence more positive, like this: Through postgraduate study, I will be able to achieve a better position.)
As for my choice of universities, I should say I love this university very much. When I came here for the first time I was deeply impressed by the academic atmosphere and the faculty. In addition, Tianjin University enjoys a superlative (or excellent) reputation in this field.
If I am lucky enough to get the chance, I will dedicate myself to my major and focus all of my energy on it. That’s all. Thank you!

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