All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned, band electric cars should replace them.

PrimarilyFirst, given that the electric car industry is growings fast enough to meet any kind of transport needed, electric cars have abilities the ability to replace the traditional cars. On the one hand, electric engines, the core of electric cars, have a higher speed compared with gas engines. So, people who drive an electric car will be more effective in transport. On the other hand, that the new type of battery which can store more energy makes it possible to support long distance trips. For instance, the newest generation electric car from Tesla company can go for from 0 to 60 miles per hours in just six seconds, and has a start range of 215 miles, which should accommodate most people's commutes.

In addition, electric cars are greener than normal cars. It is due to This is because electric cars do not burn fossil fuels, so carbon dioxide emissions would be can be avoided. Say fThus, global warming can be effectively reduced, though it which is a detrimental problem faced by whole society the whole world. The Chinese government gives us has set a good example, by enacting laws and introduce introducing programs, aiming to encourage people to buy electric cars. Beijing citizens can deserve are eligible to receive a public subsidy in the range of fifty thousand 50,000 yuan, when if they buy electric cars to replace their gasolinepetrol-powered ones.

In summary, owing to the advancement of electric cars and environmental demands, gas petrol engine cars should be banned and. eElectric cars will be the best  are a better substitute for them one day.

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你的英语显然已经非常好。所以，我的建议主要是帮你选择更最自然、更流利的生词。加油！

Plastic Model!

I was happy that I could make it good well!

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よくできました！

気を付けて下さい：

WELL　ー＞　よく

GOOD　ー＞　良い

Diary 30.08.2017 This Summer's Universiade

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写得好！文法挺好的。我的建议主要是关于生词。

注意：“practice”是名词，“practise”则是动词。（不过，美国人把“practise”作名词。实际上，美国人的文法不太准确。）

House

This house is very comfortable, but I plan to move to a new house.

Because I am going to lived with my friend, so it becomes small at the current house will be too small.

I have ever moved 6 times in total, but I remember all my houses.

The houses are have become the a good memory which can't be forget forgotten.

So I want take my time to in finding a new house carefully.

Thank you for reading :)

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よくできた！

文法は一般的に正しかったが、言葉の選んだのは、時々おかしかった。

ある質問があったら、聞いてね。

頑張って！

Bachelor party

There is a A foreigner coming came to me, and he said, : "Are you busy now at the moment?"., 

I was so nervous that I didn’t hear what he said. , I thought he was asking me if there is someone sited sitting in the position  seat next to me, so I stood up and gave way my seat to him. , But, he said, "No, no, no."

, I felt very embarrassed.  In the following conversation with him, I was tongue-tied and didn’t know how to express myself in English. Throughout During the night, I said, at most, complete two complete sentences: are "My name is Hu", and because "I am shy." 

I was hit deeply at deeply affected by that night, so I made a decision, that I will practice my oral English very hard.

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文章写得很好！你的英语能力不错。请注意：

1、符号。我觉得你最要注意的是，英语的符号。英语的符号非常重要。

2、文法。 “the”、“a”、“some” 的用法有点难。在你写的文章，如果写“eat the cake”、“drink the wine”，这就听起来是你想去吃全部的食物、喝全部的酒。所以，应该写“some”，意思是 “一点”。

The classical concert

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よくできた！

「a / an」「the」を使い方はちょっと難しいね。でも一般的に、読む者は：

+　コンサートがどのコンサートだか知っていれば、「the concert」を言うが；

+　コンサートがどのコンサートだか知らなければ、「a concert」を言う。

質問があったら、聞いてね。

頑張って！