All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned, band electric cars should replace them.

PrimarilyFirst, given that the electric car industry is growings fast enough to meet any kind of transport needed, electric cars have abilities the ability to replace the traditional cars. On the one hand, electric engines, the core of electric cars, have a higher speed compared with gas engines. So, people who drive an electric car will be more effective in transport. On the other hand, that the new type of battery which can store more energy makes it possible to support long distance trips. For instance, the newest generation electric car from Tesla company can go for from 0 to 60 miles per hours in just six seconds, and has a start range of 215 miles, which should accommodate most people's commutes.

In addition, electric cars are greener than normal cars. It is due to This is because electric cars do not burn fossil fuels, so carbon dioxide emissions would be can be avoided. Say fThus, global warming can be effectively reduced, though it which is a detrimental problem faced by whole society the whole world. The Chinese government gives us has set a good example, by enacting laws and introduce introducing programs, aiming to encourage people to buy electric cars. Beijing citizens can deserve are eligible to receive a public subsidy in the range of fifty thousand 50,000 yuan, when if they buy electric cars to replace their gasolinepetrol-powered ones.

In summary, owing to the advancement of electric cars and environmental demands, gas petrol engine cars should be banned and. eElectric cars will be the best  are a better substitute for them one day.

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