House
I have lived in this house since 6 years ago.
This house is very comfortable, but I plan to move new house.
Because I am going to lived with my friend, so it becomes small at the current house.
I have ever moved 6 times, but I remember all houses.
The house are become the good memory which can't be forget.
So I want to find a new house carefully.
Thank you for reading :)
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House
I have lived in this house for 6 years ago.This house is very comfortable, but I am planning to move to a new house.
Because I am going to lived with my friend, the current house will become small.
I have ever moved 6 times (in my life/already...), but I remember all of the houses.
The houses are became the good memories which can't be forgotten.
So I want to choose a new house carefully.
Thank you for reading :)
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I have lived in this house since for 6 years ago.
Because I am going to lived with my friend, so the space becomes is smaller than my at the current house.
Though I have ever moved 6 times, but I remember all the houses I have lived in.
The house are becomes a the good memory which cannot be forgotten.
So I want to find a new house carefully.
よくできました!私も六回家を変わることがあります。
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House
I have lived in this house since 6 six* years ago.This house is very comfortable, but I plan to move to a new house because I am going to lived with my friend, so and it will becomes small cramped** at the current house.
I have ever moved 6 six times, but I remember all the houses. {=or "all of them"}
The house are have become the good memories which that can't be forgotten.
So I want to find a new house carefully.
Thank you for reading :)
*Numbers up to ten are written out in English composition.
**Or "...the current house will be too small (for two people)".
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House
I have lived in this house since for 6 years ago.This house is very comfortable, but I plan to move to a new house.
Because I am going to lived with my friend, so it becomes small at the current house will be too small.
I have ever moved 6 times in total, but I remember all my houses.
The houses are have become the a good memory which can't be forget forgotten.
So I want take my time to in finding a new house carefully.
Thank you for reading :)
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よくできた!
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