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House I have lived in this house since 6 years ago. This house is very comfortable, but I plan to move new house. Because I am going to lived with my friend, so it becomes small at the current house. I have ever moved 6 times, but I remember all houses. The house are become the good memory which can't be forget. So I want to find a new house carefully. Thank you for reading :)

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House

I have lived in this house for 6 years ago.
This house is very comfortable, but I am planning to move to a new house.
Because I am going to lived with my friend, the current house will become small.

I have ever moved 6 times (in my life/already...), but I remember all of the houses.
The houses are became the good memories which can't be forgotten.

So I want to choose a new house carefully.
Thank you for reading :)
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I have lived in this house since for 6 years ago.

This house is very comfortable, but I plan to move to a new house.
Because I am going to lived with my friend, so the space becomes is smaller than my at the current house.

Though I have ever moved 6 times, but I remember all the houses I have lived in.
The house are becomes a the good memory which cannot be forgotten.

So I want to find a new house carefully.

よくできました!私も六回家を変わることがあります。

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House

I have lived in this house since 6 six* years ago.
This house is very comfortable, but I plan to move to a new house because I am going to lived with my friend, so and it will becomes small cramped** at the current house.

I have ever moved 6 six times, but I remember all the houses.  {=or "all of them"}
The house are have become the good memories which that can't be forgotten.

So I want to find a new house carefully.
Thank you for reading :)


*Numbers up to ten are written out in English composition.

**Or "...the current house will be too small (for two people)".

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House

I have lived in this house since for 6 years ago.

This house is very comfortable, but I plan to move to a new house.

Because I am going to lived with my friend, so it becomes small at the current house will be too small.

I have ever moved 6 times in total, but I remember all my houses.

The houses are have become the a good memory which can't be forget forgotten.

So I want take my time to in finding a new house carefully.


Thank you for reading :)

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