Diary 30.08.2017 This Summer Universiade
Today this well-known event, Summer Universiade is coming to the end in Taipei. I am so proud of those hard working athletes, their efforts and practicing are not in vain. The overview of the scores which they made this year is simply striking. Although there are over half of sports events are not popular in Olympic games, we still broke some records and gave a good impression to our competitors. Keep on! our skilled athletes!
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Diary 30.08.2017 This Summer's Universiade
Today this well-known event, the Summer Universiade, a well-known event, is coming to the an end in Taipei. I am so proud of those hard working athletes,: their efforts and practicsing are have not been not in vain. The overview of Overall, the scores records which they made achieved this year is are simply striking. Although there are over half of the sports events are not popular in the Olympic games, we still broke some records and gave a good impression to our competitors. Keep on! it up, our skilled athletes!***
写得好！文法挺好的。我的建议主要是关于生词。
注意：“practice”是名词，“practise”则是动词。（不过，美国人把“practise”作名词。实际上，美国人的文法不太准确。）
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Diary 30.08.2017 This Summer Universiade
Today this well-known event, Summer Universiade is coming to the an end in Taipei. I am so proud of those hard working athletes, their efforts and practicing are were not in vain. The overview of the scores which they made this year is simply striking. Although there are over half of the sports events are not popular in the Olympic games, we still broke some records and gave a good impression to our competitors. Keep on! Hooray for our skilled athletes!0
Their performances were all great! ^^
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Sound like your athletes did great!
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