IELTS Writing Practice: The positive and the negative sides of globalization
Hi, this is a writing practice for IELTS, the topic is "The positive and the negative sides of globalization".
Any help will be appreciated!
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Over the past several decades, without any doubt, the globalization is one of the most significant processes has been taking place, which effects a large-scale of population world-widely and deeply. In the meanwhile, the controversies over this phenomenon about whether it is a blessing or a curse are never stopped.
It is inevitable that some adverse effects are brought by this great process. Due to the drastically increasing demands of various industrial products, massive numbers of factories were established to meet the market’s needs, some of which caused heavy pollutions to the environment. Such as the electricity, an indispensable energy source to support the industry, it is mainly generated from fossil fuel, especially the burning of coal that not only emits greenhouse gases but also contaminates the air. According to the research, an increasing number of health issues are caused by inhaling polluted air.
However, the defects mentioned above will be solved with the improvements in renewable energy. By the time when a large proportion of energy is converted from solar and wind. Apparently, they are free and eternal, both environment and economy will be benefited from it.
Besides that, with the globalization, the peace of the world will become more stable than ever before. Through deeply cooperating in various aspects, such as technology and economy, these involved countries have established a tight relationship with each other, which lead to the impossibility of starting a war among them. In some places, like Mideast, a proportion of people still cannot enjoy a peaceful life. According to the research, these areas are less developed or isolated from the globalization, which contributes to its turbulent society.
To conclude, although some side affects cannot be totally avoided, the significant benefits are far more important for the human civilization. In my opinion, we should put more attention on solving the issues brought by development rather than deny the improvement of globalization that we have achieved.