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A letter practice: During a recent plane journey Hi, this is an IELTS writing practice, any help will be appreciated! ------------------ TOPIC: During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter remind him when and where you met tell him what kind of job you are interested in say why you think you would be suitable for the job ------------------------- Dear Mr Brand, I am writing in regards to confirming the possibility of becoming one of your restaurants’ manager. We have met on a plane from Beijing to HongKong last week, and I was sitting next to you. At the time, We had exchanged our views about how to increase a restaurant’s daily revenue and, interestingly, you said you were running a chain of restaurants and invited me to join your team. I would like to become a manager and I am sure I have the qualifications. For the past decade, I have been working in the food and restaurant industry, and five years ago I was promoted from a common staff to a manager. Additionally, I am now working for a famous chain of restaurants too. My resume is attached with this email, if you are interested could check it. I was impressed greatly by your vision of future and obviously you are an energetic and experienced businessman. That is the most important reason why I accept your suggestion to come to your team. Thank you for taking time to read my message, hope to hear from you soon. Yours sincerely, Zhuang.

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A letter practice: During a recent plane journey

Hi, this is an IELTS writing practice, any help will be appreciated!
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TOPIC:
During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants.

Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter
remind him when and where you met
tell him what kind of job you are interested in
say why you think you would be suitable for the job

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Dear Mr Brand,

I am writing in regards to confirming the possibility of becoming one of your restaurants’ manager.

We have met on a plane from Beijing to Hong Kong last week, and I was sitting next to you. At the time, We had exchanged our views about on how to increase a restaurant’s daily revenue and, interestingly, you said you were running a chain of restaurants and invited me to discuss the possibility of joining your team (not quite!).

I would like to become a manager and I am sure I have the qualifications. For the past decade, I have been working in the food and restaurant industry, and five years ago I was promoted from a common staff to a manager/management role (of ?) Additionally, (not both additionally and too) I am now working for a famous chain of restaurants too. My resume is attached with this email, if you are interested could you check/look through it.

I was impressed greatly by your vision of future and obviously clearly you are an energetic and experienced businessman (this is getting to be heavy flattery!). That is the most important reason why I accept your suggestion to come to your team.

Thank you for taking time to read my message - I hope to hear from you soon.

Yours sincerely,
Zhuang.

Pretty good!

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A letter practice: During a recent plane journey

Hi, this is an IELTS writing practice, any help will be appreciated!
------------------
TOPIC:
During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants.

Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter
remind him when and where you met
tell him, what kind of job you are interested in,
say why you think you would be suitable for the job

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Dear Mr Brand,

I am writing in regards to confirming taking up your offer of the possibility of becoming one of your restaurants’ manager.

We have met on a plane from Beijing to HongKong last week, and I was sitting next to you. At the time, we had were exchanging our views about how to increase a restaurant’s daily revenue and, interestingly, you said you were running a chain of restaurants and invited me to join your team.

I would like to become a manager and I am sure I have the qualifications. For the past decade, I have been working in the food and restaurant industry, and five years ago, I was promoted from a common staff to a manager. Additionally, I am now working for a famous chain of restaurants too. My resume is attached with this email, if you are interested could you please check it/have a look at it.

I was greatly impressed greatly by your vision of future and obviously you are an energetic and experienced businessman. That is the most important reason why I have accepted your suggestion/offer to come to be part of your team.

Thank you for taking your time to read my message, hope to hear from you soon.

Yours sincerely,
Zhuang.

Well done Zhuang! 




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'A practice letter' rather than 'A letter practice'

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