Hi! what about this? Can someone check it please, thanks! This is the conclusion of my essay. Before concluding, there is another important question to make "should zoos exist?". It is well known that they encourage animal conservation; Nonetheless, they also encourage animal abuse for human entertainment being totally unconscious of the physical-mental problems that animals can develop. As it was mentioned previously, most of the animals in zoos are not endangered, they are there just for ambitious reasons. So, should zoos exist? they definitely should exist! But under the condition that their main purpose will be the preservation of endangered animals, and only these animals. Living in the most suitable places and being helped to not lose their instincts and behaviors so one day they will be back where they belong. Moreover, zoos must be regularly supervised to see if they are following the laws, if animals are in the best optimal conditions and if they have presented behavioral changes. In this way, most of the saddest glances will have been disappeared from the zoos.

help!! Can someone check this paragraph please?? This paragraph is about cons of zoos, so previously I mentioned the pros this is the conclutive sentence: "to conclude, zoos have been a target of criticism through the years; nevertheless, they have contributed to and promoted animal conservation and protection." And this is the second paragraph (please check my puntuaction, structure ideas and right use of words and connectors, also if it makes sense). "Currently, the world population is concentrated mostly in urban areas, separating us from nature more and more. Therefore, zoos have become a good alternative to connect nature with the human being. However, there are many people that reject this places due to the contraindications they can imply. For example, zoos are supposed to promote animal preservation, but they also promote animal abuse. The 95% of the animals of zoos in Colombia aren't on the endangered list; according to other researches, the 97% of the animals of the Zoos in England aren't part of the European Captive Birth Program (EEP's). Then, these animals are taken out from their natural habitat to be part just of the human amusement. As a result, another implication is the difficulty of returning these animals back to their habitat once they are in captivity. That privilege is given to those animals in danger; as was the case of the snail Partula, the English field cricket, the horse Przewalski and the wild rat Dormouse, who were successfully reinserted in nature whilst those animals that aren't endangered and are subdued till their death entertaining humans. It can also generate an imbalance in the ecosystems. Ultimately, another negative aspect is the behavioral changes animals can develop. Most of the zoos don't provide suitable establishments for the animals, being confined in uncomfortable cages. The stress, the poor simulations of nature and the poor encouragement of hunting and surviving can generate a big impact on their lives, they can develop mental problems and also genetic alterations. In resume, which is supposed to be the main objective of a Zoo? Although they have changed a little bit the focus of the exhibition, they need to be more responsible and more conscious about animals lives. They feel as we do, they need love as we do and they also deserve the same rights as we do."

Hi! can u please check if its well written? It's about a hypothetical situation, does it make sense? I think that most of us have ever felt confused or desperate when the moment of choosing what to do with our lives comes to mind, maybe you have some options but you think you aren't good enough or you feel terrified of failing. However, you try to achieve your goals, to follow your dreams, but suddenly something happens your score is not good enough to study what you want or you don't have the qualities required to make your dreams come true. Is that the real frustrating moment, you start looking for many other ideas and this is why I'm here. so what would have happened if I had been able to study veterinary or if I had been a professional volleyball player? then, with the first option mention, veterinary, I undoubtedly would have lived far from home and I would have to learn cooking, that would have been very tedious and also I don't know what would have happened with the Cats shelter, I couldn't be very attentive to them. If I had had the opportunity to become a professional volleyball player, I would have been traveling to tournaments, maybe I would have awarded some medals, I' d have enjoyed every game and giving all of me, learning every time. Nonetheless, if some of those two options would have happened, I wouldn't have met the good friends I have now, I wouldn't have met my boyfriend and I wouldn't have learned to appreciate teacher's job, among others. I'm not unhappy at this moment I have accepted what is happening in my life, I like this and I hope to fall crazy in love with the career. Everything happens for a reason.

HI, can you please check my puntuaction, structure ideas and the right use of connectors. Nowadays, most of the zoos have changed the focus of the exhibition of animals into a focus more conscious of wildlife conservation. In this way, the preservation and protection of animals have become one of the paramount factors of zoos. The establishments for animal conservation are more suitable and more comfortable; providing a natural habitat, and contributing to a better life for those animals which have more difficulty on surviving by themselves as those who are on the endangered list. Likewise, These animals receive a proper nutrition, diets and medical cares that are fundamental in their lives. Carers of the zoos play an important role at the moment of providing to all the animal species the essential nutrients due to it is quite vital to know the different aspects of each species (gastrointestinal physiology and morphology, ecology, among others) and also knowing the nutritional composition of all ingredients and inputs used in food and medicine to facilitate the development of normal behaviors in them. Finally, another positive aspect has to do with the education people can acquire from zoos. Despite the variation in sizes, Most of the big cities have a zoo; this is how they yield chances for people to learn more about animals, their habitats, and their behaviors, also including the creation of an aware mind in order to protect and respect them. to conclude, zoos have been a target of criticism through the years ;nevertheless, they have contributed and promoted animal conservation and protection.

Help! PROS AND CONS OF ZOOS “All creatures deserve a life free from fear and pain” - Maura Cummings This is why so many places that preserve and protect wildlife exist. Zoos, for example, are considered one of the best places to provide benefits to animals and also providing entertainment to families; approximately 20% of different city population visit a zoo every year. However, not everything is as good as it seems, most of the animals are confined in small places and many others are overprotected. Although zoos promote wildlife conservation, appropriate nutrition and education to people, they also promote animal abuse for human amusement, interference in natural processes and behavioral changes in animals.

Zoos, pros and cons Hi! i need help to see if this introduction is correct (puntuaction, structure, connectors, grammar...everything) Thank you so much Zoos pros and cons “All creatures are deserving of a life free of fear and pain”- Maura Cummings. This is why exits so many places that preserves and protects wild lives; Zoos, for example are considered one the best places that provides benefits to animals at once that provides entertainment to families. Around a 20% of the population in different cities visit a zoo per year; however, most of the animals are confined in small places and many other are overprotected. so, although conservation, appropriate nutrition and education are benefits promoted here, they also promote animal abuse, human amusement and behavioral changes.