Summary of a small reading about Alice's adventures in Wonderland

Alice was with her sister sitting on the grass. She was too bored because she had to listen to her sister who started reading a story for her. Suddenly, a white rabbit past passed her while she was yawning and Alice immediately she ran to follow him. She jumped down into a hole rabbit hole to catch the white rabbit but whilst she was falling into it she noticed that the rabbit wasn’t there. on any side The only things she saw were a lot of jars on some bookshelves. Finally, she landed on the floor and she saw again the white rabbit again, walking through a passage. When she almost reached it, he get lost disappeared, turning a corner.

Consequently. Alice arrived in an empty room and she saw a golden key on a glass table. The key only opened one small door hidden behind a curtain, however, she couldn’t enter because she was too big. When she turned back her glance, she noticed a bottle on the table that said “DRINK ME”.  She drank it at once and started to get smaller more and more every time and smaller; but she had left the key on the table. In that moment she saw a tart under the table so she ate it because she thought she could be big again to take the key.  and definitely Alice started to get bigger and bigger until she touched the top of the roof.

Alice started crying in view of her size,  due because it wasn’t helpful at all. Her tears were so big that she made a pool. After a while she became small again and she was drowning in their her tears. There were a lot of animals right there too. helpfully Luckily, she was helped by a mouse to reach the shore, and later she realized that everything around her was quite different now.

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Hi Daniela, your writing is pretty good. I made some changes to run on sentences, where it sounds better to begin a new sentence instead of having a comma. There were also some minor issues with vocabulary and word order. Hope this helps :)