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Hi! can u please check if its well written? It's about a hypothetical situation, does it make sense? I think that most of us have ever felt confused or desperate when the moment of choosing what to do with our lives comes to mind, maybe you have some options but you think you aren't good enough or you feel terrified of failing. However, you try to achieve your goals, to follow your dreams, but suddenly something happens your score is not good enough to study what you want or you don't have the qualities required to make your dreams come true. Is that the real frustrating moment, you start looking for many other ideas and this is why I'm here. so what would have happened if I had been able to study veterinary or if I had been a professional volleyball player? then, with the first option mention, veterinary, I undoubtedly would have lived far from home and I would have to learn cooking, that would have been very tedious and also I don't know what would have happened with the Cats shelter, I couldn't be very attentive to them. If I had had the opportunity to become a professional volleyball player, I would have been traveling to tournaments, maybe I would have awarded some medals, I' d have enjoyed every game and giving all of me, learning every time. Nonetheless, if some of those two options would have happened, I wouldn't have met the good friends I have now, I wouldn't have met my boyfriend and I wouldn't have learned to appreciate teacher's job, among others. I'm not unhappy at this moment I have accepted what is happening in my life, I like this and I hope to fall crazy in love with the career. Everything happens for a reason.

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Hi! can u please check if its well written? It's about a hypothetical situation, does it make sense?

I think that most of us have sometime felt confused or desperate when the moment to choose what to do with our lives comes to mind; maybe you have some options but you think you are not good enough or you feel terrified of failing. However, you try to achieve your goals, to follow your dreams, but suddenly something happens and your score is not good enough to study what you want or you don't have the qualities required to make your dreams come true. In that, the real frustrating moment, you start looking for many other ideas and this is why I'm here. So what would have happened if I had been able to study veterinary medicine or if I had been a professional volleyball player? Then, with the first option mentioned, the veterinary, I undoubtedly would have lived far from home and I would have to learn cooking, that would have been very tedious and also I don't know what would have happened with the cat shelter and I couldn't be very attentive to them. If I had had the opportunity to become a professional volleyball player, I would have been traveling to tournaments, maybe I would have been awarded some medals, I' d have enjoyed every game and giving my all, learning every time. Nonetheless, if some of those two options had happened, I wouldn't have met the good friends I have now, I wouldn't have met my boyfriend and I wouldn't have learned to appreciate a teacher's job, among others. I'm not unhappy at this moment and I have accepted what is happening in my life. I like this and I hope to fall crazily in love with the career. Everything happens for a reason.

Very well written!

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Hi! can u please check if its well written? It's about a hypothetical situation, does it make sense?

I think that most of us have at some point felt confused or anxious when deciding what to do with our lives.   comes to mind, Maybe you are considering  have some options where you think you aren't capable or you are afraid of failing. However, you try to achieve your goals, to follow your dreams, but suddenly something happens: your grades are not good enough to pursue a certain field of study what you want or you don't have what it takes to make your dreams come true. Is that the tipping point, when you start looking for many other options? This is why I'm here. So what would have happened if I had been able to study veterinary sciences or if I had been a professional volleyball player? In the former situation, I undoubtedly would have lived far from home and I would have to learn cooking: that would have been very tedious. and also I don't know what would have happened with the cat shelter - I couldn't be very as attentive to them as needed. If I had had the opportunity to become a professional volleyball player, I would have been traveling to tournaments. Maybe I would have awarded some medals, and I' d have enjoyed every game and giving my all to each one, learning from every experience. Nonetheless, if one of those options came to life, I wouldn't have met the good friends I have now, I wouldn't have met my boyfriend, and I wouldn't have learned to appreciate the teaching professionteacher's job, among others. I'm not unhappy at this moment I have no regrets - I have accepted what is happening in my life. I like what I'm doing and I hope to fall crazy in love with a career. Everything happens for a reason.

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