Zoos, pros and cons

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Zoos - Pros and Cons (or maybe "The Pros and Cons of Zoos")

“All creatures are deserving of a life free of fear and pain”- Maura Cummings. This is why exits so many places exist to that preserve and protect wild lives. Zoos, for example are considered one of the best places that provides benefits to animals at once that provides while also giving entertainment to families. Around a 20% of the population in different cities visit a zoo per year. However, most of the animals are confined in small places and many other are overprotected (? explain why this is bad). So, although conservation, appropriate nutrition and education are benefits promoted here, they also promote animal abuse, human amusement and behavioral changes. (Is human amusement good or bad?)

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Zoos, pros and cons

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Zoos
Pros and cons

“All creatures are deserving of a life free of fear and pain”- Maura Cummings. (If this is a direct quote it should not be changed) This is why exits so many places that preserves and protects wild lives; Zoos, for example are considered one the best places that provides benefits to animals at once that provides entertainment to families. Around a 20% of the population in different cities visit a zoo per year; however, most of the animals are confined in small places and many other are overprotected. so, although conservation, appropriate nutrition and education are benefits promoted here, they also promote animal abuse, human amusement and behavioral changes.

This is why there are so many places that conserve and protect wild lives.  Zoos, for example, are considered one of the best places to provide benefit to animals and also entertainment and education to families.  Around 20% of the population in a city visits a zoo in a year.  However, most of the animals are confined in small cages and many others are overprotected??  So, although conservation, appropriate nutrition and education for the public are benefits promoted at zoos,  animal abuse and behavioural changes do occur.

The Pros and Cons of Zoos

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As Maura Cummings famously stated, “[a]ll creatures are deserving of a life free of fear and pain." This is why so many places that preserve and protect wildlife exist. Zoos, for example, are considered one of the best places to provide both protection for animals and entertainment for humans. Approximately 20% of different city populations visit a zoo every year; however, most of the animals there are confined to small spaces and some are even overprotected. Though wildlife conservation education and appropriate nutrition given to the animals are positive attributes of zoos, animal abuse for human amusement is, unfortunately, still being promoted.

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Zoos, pros and cons

Hi! i need help to see if this introduction is correct (punctuation, structure, connectors, grammar...everything)
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Zoos
pros and cons

“All creatures are deserving of a life free of fear and pain”- Maura Cummings. This is why exits [exit=salir] so many places exist that preserve and protect [plural verb] wild lives. Zoos, for example, are considered one of the best places to provide benefits to animals and, at the same time, to provide entertainment to families. Around 20% of the population in different cities visit [you could use visits, this is a grey area because "the population" is sometimes taken as a inherent plural, but grammatically it is a singular, similar to la gente]  a zoo per year; however, most of the animals are confined in small places and many others are overprotected.[I suggest to separate the previous sentence into two sentences. The first clause has no logical connection to the second]  So, although conservation, appropriate nutrition and education are benefits promoted here, they also promote animal abuse, human amusement and behavioral changes.

[The last sentence of the paragraph can be called "a sweeping conclusion." It is frowned upon because it not fully or well supported by the ideas preceding it. You might rephrase it as follows, "So, although conservation, appropriate nutrition and education and entertainment are benefits promoted here, some problems are evident as well."  Otherwise, you should include more supporting statements in your preceding paragraph.]

Zoos, pros and cons

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Zoos
pros and cons

“All creatures are deserveing of a life free of from fear and pain”- Maura Cummings. This is why exits so many places that preserves and protects wildlife existlives; Zzoos, for example, are considered one of the best places that provides benefits to animals, at once while also that providinges entertainment to families. Around a 20% of the population in different cities visit a zoo per year; however, most of the animals are confined in small places and many other are overprotected. so, aAlthough zoos promote beneficial things such as conservation, appropriate nutrition and education are benefits promoted here, they also promote animal abuse, human amusement, and behavioral changes.

'Different cities' is not clear; if 20% of the populations in cities go to the zoo every year, just say in cities. If it's western cities, say western cities. A native English speaker would not say 'in different cities'; if you really want to say many cities say 'various cities', not 'different'.

Putting "human amusement" in with behavioral changes and animal abuse indicates that human amusement is an inherently bad thing, where earlier it seems like it is a good thing "provides benefits to animals while also provides entertainment to families"

By behavioral changes,  do you mean the animals rely on humans? If so, write "behavioral changes in the animals".