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Yesterday I did took my last exam, so today I start today my summer holidays. I thought about some projects for the summer, and I'm going to write something about them.

Remodeling a stance(1): I have a building at the edge of my town. I told my friends about remodeling its basement in order to have there a nice and fresh place to visit during this these hot summer days that we have in Seville.

Growing my garden: I have always wanted to eat vegetables that I planted, so I'm going to build a that garden in order to have tomatoes, lettuces lettuce, onions, and (my favourites!) melons. Growing the garden maybe is bitly(2) a bit/a little hard, but I will enjoy eating my sweety sweet melons when they are grown.

Tweaking my PC: I like computers, but I do not have enough money to build the last generation hardware, so I want to improve my computer by trying some new software, installing another OS or passing some tests to on my hard drive and my RAM. I love having intensive PC tweaking days because I feel like a real computer technician despite the fact that I am just an amateur user!

These are some of my summer projects, I want to enjoy them as I enjoy practicing my English here. Have a nice day!

1. ¡No se que quieres decir aquí! Usually, a "stance" is a position you take on an issue (it can also be a physical position you hold, like a "fighting stance").  Por ejemplo, podrías decir "Her stance on gay marriage is that it should be legal."

2. "Bitly" is not a word!  You can say "a little" or "a bit" or even "a little bit".

Trip on boat

Hi Kate;
That sounds very well nice. Last month we went on a boat trip with my University collages colleagues, it´s It was marvelous, even the weather was very nice.
I recommend you to do it, but you have to be careful with about the weather, because if the weather is not good you can spend have a horrible day because, you have to take into account (this is grammatically correct but sounds a little weird here), the boat doesn´t have anywhere where you can settle(again, this is grammatically correct but not something a native speaker would say, something like "hide" or "take cover" would be better) if it ´s raining ("if it's raining" is OK, but a native speaker would probably say "if it rains").
You can take the boat at 8:00 am or at 10:00 am, and you can do it every day per of the week, even Saturday and Sunday. The boat stopped thirty minutes in Bourne Castle, I recommend you don´t waste your time buying a lot of suveniers in the shops inside that there are in the enter because the Castle is very big and if you spend a lot of time in the shops, you are not going ("you are not going" is OK, but "you won't" would be better here) to have time to visit it.
You can have lunch in the Castle, because you have there are some restaurants inside, but it is better if you take a picnic, you will be able to eat have it in the at the second stop of the trip.
In the afternoon we went to a lake, you can take advantage to do any kind of water sports , we didn´t do anything, but you are in fit, you should try to do it.
Finally, if you are more than 15 people you have there are several discounts, depending on the stops you want to do.
I hope you enjoy it.
Best Regards.

Good job!  I know there's a lot of red but really it's wasn't that bad :)

Mountain climbing

I was born at in Hue and living at live in Ho Chi Minh, and I like to travel. Two year years ago I traveled to Sapa at in North West Vietnam, and conquer conquered (normally you would just say climbed, but conquered is more literary, good word!)Fansipan mountain,. it was a interesting trip and challenges challenge.

We went to Sapa by train from Hanoi,. at the beginning We have had no any luck, the train was late 8 hour 8 hours late because of a landslide. Our plan could be have been ruined broken, but it didn't wasn't. We was made the decision climbing to climb at night, it was really really challenges challenging.

It was stated started to drizzle and the way was dirty (you probably want to say "muddy" but dirty does technically work). Crossing We crossed the hard way and then We was sleep slept in the camps, having completed the first block part. We was were breathing by ear hard and still had many challenges ahead of us.

In the morning tomorrow The next morning We was getup we got up early, the second block part was waiting, and the weather was better than the last night before. The way was easy and the scenery very beautiful, some time there are were colourful flowers on the roadside, and some time We was see saw a small waterfall it that look so looked very nice. We had been complete completed the second block part and have had a lunch with "com lam" (rice was cooking cooked into the bamboo), have short relax time relaxed for a bit and then We keep kept climbing.

The way come to the mountain top was very difficult, and very craggy but when you finish, you can stand by on clouds, it was imagine (I don't know what you're trying to say, but "imagine" is incorrect here.  Imagine is a verb and you want an adjective). I don't know how say anything about my think thoughts when I come got to the top, it was very interesting and very imagine...

Hope to share you a nice story, if have any wrong grammar or sentences, I'm very happy with your correction.