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Mountain climbing I was born at Hue and living at Ho Chi Minh, I like travel. Two year ago I traveled to Sapa at North West Vietnam, and conquer Fansipan mountain, it was a interesting trip and challenges. We went to Sapa by train from Hanoi, at beginning We have no any luck, the train was late 8 hour because landslide. Our plan could be broken, but it didn't. We was decision climbing at night, it really really challenges. It was stated to drizzle and the way was dirty. Crossing the hard way and then We was sleep in the camps, completed first block We was breathing by ear and still many challenges ahead. In the morning tomorrow We was getup early, the second block was waiting, the weather was better than last night. The way was easy and the scenery very beautiful, some time there are colourful flowers on roadside, some time We was see small waterfall it look so nice. We had been complete second block and have a lunch with "com lam" (rice was cooking into the bamboo), have short relax time We keep climbing. The way come to the mountain top very difficult, very craggy but when finish, you can stand by on clouds, it was imagine. I don't know say anything about my think when come to the top, it very interesting very imagine... Hope to share you a nice story, if have any wrong grammar or sentences, I'm very happy with your correction.

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Mountain climbing

I was born at in Hue and living at live in Ho Chi Minh, and I like to travel. Two year years ago I traveled to Sapa at in North West Vietnam, and conquer conquered (normally you would just say climbed, but conquered is more literary, good word!)Fansipan mountain,. it was a interesting trip and challenges challenge.

We went to Sapa by train from Hanoi,. at the beginning We have had no any luck, the train was late 8 hour 8 hours late because of a landslide. Our plan could be have been ruined broken, but it didn't wasn't. We was made the decision climbing to climb at night, it was really really challenges challenging.

It was stated started to drizzle and the way was dirty (you probably want to say "muddy" but dirty does technically work). Crossing We crossed the hard way and then We was sleep slept in the camps, having completed the first block part. We was were breathing by ear hard and still had many challenges ahead of us.

In the morning tomorrow The next morning We was getup we got up early, the second block part was waiting, and the weather was better than the last night before. The way was easy and the scenery very beautiful, some time there are were colourful flowers on the roadside, and some time We was see saw a small waterfall it that look so looked very nice. We had been complete completed the second block part and have had a lunch with "com lam" (rice was cooking cooked into the bamboo), have short relax time relaxed for a bit and then We keep kept climbing.

The way come to the mountain top was very difficult, and very craggy but when you finish, you can stand by on clouds, it was imagine (I don't know what you're trying to say, but "imagine" is incorrect here.  Imagine is a verb and you want an adjective). I don't know how say anything about my think thoughts when I come got to the top, it was very interesting and very imagine...

Hope to share you a nice story, if have any wrong grammar or sentences, I'm very happy with your correction.

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