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- 2014/1/7 其他工作 如果你需要轉工作，轉到一個工作和你現工作很不同，你選擇什麼？ 我現在是資金工程師，每個天我都作數學。我很喜歡這樣，但我也想是廚師或者音樂家。 為什麼廚師或者音樂家？當然因為我很喜歡吃飯還是聽音樂（饞貓一點，hah ）。 下個生我一定會是音樂家。 是廚師需要等，不要變胖 :) If you had to change jobs, change to a job really different from your current job, what would you choose? Right now I work in finance, as an engineer, and every day I do math. I like the way things are, but I would also like to be a chef or a musician. Why a chef or a musician? Because I like to eat and listen to music (a bit gluttonous, hah). In my next life I'll certainly be a musician Being a chef will have to wait, I don't want to become fat :)January 7, 2014110
- 2014/1/6 學期第一天 學期第一天 今天是第一天的我最後的學期。在三月大學畢業，然後我開始工作。 我慢慢變老, 我一點難過。我知道我會懷念這些年，這時光。 去年計劃是學到博士，但現在我累，還是旅行比學習聽起來很好 :) 今天我聽說這下面試： 月落烏啼霜滿天、 江楓漁火對愁眠。 姑蘇城外寒山寺、 夜半鐘聲到客船。 這試有很簡單的畫面，但很複雜的情緒。我很想旅行，感覺這些情緒我老之前。 First Day of the New School Semester Today is the first day of my last school semester. In march, I will graduate, and then start work. I'm getting old, and a bit sad. I know I'm going to look back and miss these years. Last year the plan was to get a PhD, but I'm tired, and traveling sounds better than studying. Today I heard the following poem: This poem paints such a simple picture, but has such complex emotions. I very much want to travel, and feel these emotions before I get old.January 6, 201490
about company move
about my company's move
my company have moved to other place recently,it have a lots stuff,so we find a remover to help .
my company has recently moved to another location, it has lots of stuff, so we hired a moving company to help.
the remover were done several group which begin carry our stuff from different place,for safe,we arrange employee to watch it in every group.
The moving was done with several groups who carried our stuff to different places. For safety, we arranged an employee to watch over every group.
l am responsble for one group which have a shy boy,he looked so honest and shy,we talk a little whiles the move time,than l know he's family is in the country of other city.I am responsible for one group which had a shy boy, he looked so honest and shy, we talked a little during moving, he told me his family away in some rural city.
because he's life is economic difficulties,so he work here to make money by he's strength when he high school graduate.
Because his life is filled with economic difficulties, he came here to work after he graduated high school to make money.
chinese: 大學畢業 (大學 is the subject)
english: I graduated from college (I is the subject)
最近公司要搬家，东西太多了，所以就请了一个搬家公司来帮忙。搬家公司的人被分成几组，分部位开始搬运我们公司的东西。为了安全起见，公司在每个组都安排了员工看管。
我负责的这一组有个小伙子，看上去很老实很腼腆。在搬运的间隙，我跟他闲聊了几句，知道了他家是外地农村的，因为生活困难，今年高中一毕业，就来城里给人家打工卖力气挣钱了。0 votedDecember 30, 20130Merry Christmas~
Merry Christmas～Although there's no gift for me~
I'm sitting in Costa Coffee with my friend now.
He is preparing for the comming coming examination.Policemen of china are so busy~
In fact， I feel tired,I want to go to sleep asleep very much~
It's become more and more cold,I got sick again~Hope your sickness gets better soon!
0 votedDecember 30, 20130- 2013/12/29 笑話 今天我聽說這下面笑話： 從前一個人在公園漫步。他碰到一隻狗還是一個人。這狗像很兇，所以這人問別人“你的狗咬人嗎？”。“不，牠很友好”他回答。但，有點以後這狗咬他！“喂！你說你的狗不咬！“。”對，我的狗不咬，但這狗不是我的狗“！ 借狗咬人 :) Today I heard the following joke: A long time ago a man went on a walk in the park. He bumped into a dog and a man. The dog looked really scary, so he asked the other man "Does your dog bite?". "No, my dog's really friendly" he replied. But, a short while later, the dog bites the man! "Hey! You said your dog doesn't bite!". "That's right, MY dog doesn't bite people, but this isn't MY dog." Borrow a dog to bite a man (reference to a chengyu: 借刀殺人).December 30, 201330
I'd be very grateful if you could correct my essay
Winter is finally beated (beaten back / defeated ) by Spring finally,. It is a warm, and cloudless, a nice day today.I am sitting beside the window, enjoying the sunshine. And Outside the window, many plants flowers, and girls are taking photos beside flower trees. Children are laughing and playing, chasing each other in the lawn. The dogs are napping off with listlessness.
I will be very gratful if you could correct my essay.1. you could also say: winter is beaten back by spring, finally. but you need the comma.
2. You are saying: it is a XXX, YYY, and ZZZ. You only need the and at the last position.
3. You should avoid using 'and' at the beginning of a sentence. If you do, it makes the sentence feel very fast and rhythmic. In this case I think it sounds better without the and.
4. plants flower* (you drop the 's' if the subject is plural, like: birds sing, a bird sings)
5. 'flower trees' isn't commonly said, even if it's right. you could say flowering trees, trees covered in flowers.
6. listlessness is a relatively advanced word. your essay sounds very calm and relaxed, and the word feels out of place.
overall, very good. you have a very nice style of writing. I like your calm descriptions of nature. you might like Hemingway or Pablo Neruda if you are looking for something to read.
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