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2014/1/6 學期第一天 學期第一天 今天是第一天的我最後的學期。在三月大學畢業,然後我開始工作。 我慢慢變老, 我一點難過。我知道我會懷念這些年,這時光。 去年計劃是學到博士,但現在我累,還是旅行比學習聽起來很好 :) 今天我聽說這下面試: 月落烏啼霜滿天、  江楓漁火對愁眠。 姑蘇城外寒山寺、 夜半鐘聲到客船。 這試有很簡單的畫面,但很複雜的情緒。我很想旅行,感覺這些情緒我老之前。 First Day of the New School Semester Today is the first day of my last school semester. In march, I will graduate, and then start work. I'm getting old, and a bit sad. I know I'm going to look back and miss these years. Last year the plan was to get a PhD, but I'm tired, and traveling sounds better than studying. Today I heard the following poem: This poem paints such a simple picture, but has such complex emotions. I very much want to travel, and feel these emotions before I get old.

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2014/1/6 學期第一天

新學期第一天

今天是第一天的我最後的學期(我最后一个学期的第一天)。(我将)在三月大學畢業,然後我開始工作。

我慢慢變老, 我有一點難過。(T-T)我也是   我知道我會懷念這些年,這時光。

去年計劃是學到博士,但現在我累,還是旅行比學習聽起來很好 :)

今天我聽說這下面試(下面这首诗):

月落烏啼霜滿天、 
江楓漁火對愁眠。
姑蘇城外寒山寺、
夜半鐘聲到客船。

這試(诗)有很簡單的畫面,但很複雜的情緒。(<---说得好)我很想旅行,感覺這些情緒我老之前。(在我变老之前,感受这些情绪) 

First Day of the New School Semester

Today is the first day of my last school semester. In march, I will graduate, and then start work.

I'm getting old, and a bit sad. I know I'm going to look back and miss these years.

Last year the plan was to get a PhD, but I'm tired, and traveling sounds better than studying.

Today I heard the following poem:

This poem paints such a simple picture, but has such complex emotions. I very much want to travel, and feel these emotions before I get old.

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2014/1/6 新學期的第一天

新學期的第一天

今天是最后一個學期的第一天。我将在三月份毕业,然後開始工作。

我的青春一去不還, 我有點難過。我知道儅我迴首往事,我會懷念。

 

去年我本來是計劃學到博士,但現在我感到很累,還是旅行比學習輕鬆 :)

今天我聼到了這下面這首詩:

月落烏啼霜滿天、 
江楓漁火對愁眠。
姑蘇城外寒山寺、
夜半鐘聲到客船。

這首詩畫面簡單,但飽含著複雜的情緒。在我老了之前,我很想去旅行,去体會那些情緒。

First Day of the New School Semester

Today is the first day of my last school semester. In march, I will graduate, and then start work.

I'm getting old, and a bit sad. I know I'm going to look back and miss these years.

Last year the plan was to get a PhD, but I'm tired, and traveling sounds better than studying.

Today I heard the following poem:

This poem paints such a simple picture, but has such complex emotions. I very much want to travel, and feel these emotions before I get old.

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2014/1/6 學期第一天

學期第一天

今天是第一天的我最後的學期我最后一学期的第一天。在三月大學畢業,然後我開始工作。 三月份我将毕业,开始工作

我慢慢的變老, 心里有點難過。我知道我會懷念這些年,這的時光。

去年的計劃是學到博士,但我累了,還是旅行比學習聽起來很好旅行听起来比学习要好很多 :)

今天我聽說這下面試: 今天我听到一首诗

月落烏啼霜滿天、 
江楓漁火對愁眠。
姑蘇城外寒山寺、
夜半鐘聲到客船。

這試有很簡單的畫面,但很複雜的情緒。我很想旅行,感覺這些情緒我老之前。 这诗首用很简单画面,传达了很复杂的情感,我很想去旅行,在我老之前去感受这样的情感。

First Day of the New School Semester

Today is the first day of my last school semester. In march, I will graduate, and then start work.

I'm getting old, and a bit sad. I know I'm going to look back and miss these years.

Last year the plan was to get a PhD, but I'm tired, and traveling sounds better than studying.

Today I heard the following poem:

This poem paints such a simple picture, but has such complex emotions. I very much want to travel, and feel these emotions before I get old.

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謝謝,我用繁體因為我有很多朋友從台灣來。但我覺得繁體或者簡體都很難。I am looking forward to life after graduation, but of course I will miss my time in school. It is a very bittersweet feeling (I think bittersweet means 悲歡, more or less). Maybe you have heard the famous expression "Fortune favors the brave", your words reminded me of it. I'm very cheerful most of the time, but the poem really touched me.
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虽然很多句子有一些问题,但是看的出来你的中文已经很好了,而且还是用繁体字写的,加油。 Alhough many sentences have some problems, your chinese is pretty well as a 2nd language. For you, it's a new start after graduation. No matter what do you want to do, just do it. Don't leave regrets by yourself. Because when you choose something, the life always give your special surprise. Cheer up

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