if is not too much for ask TOEFL PRACTICE Hello guys ^^ if is not too much for ask, can you please watch a youtube video (only the first 5 min) and tell me if I am doing good with my integrated essay. Pleeasee I beg you. I really appreciate all the help that I could get from you ^^ Thanks a lot https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AY2ZUGBYhNQ The main topic of the reading passage is about DTT, a chemical created during the world war II to kill unwanted insects. Mainly, mosquitos which carry diseases to people like malaria, and agricultural pests. But instead of do the function for what was created, the waste of the chemical which was poisonous went to the soil and water and this make harm to the birds and fishes. This poison and kill wildlife, for example this was the case of the bald eagle. Also affects to human health, by consuming products that were sprayed with higher levels of DTT. This provokes the develop of some diseases like diabetes, cancer and birth defects. For this reason, USA banned this product but suddenly when the product finally works correctly and was introduced to the market mosquitoes started developing a resistant to the chemical. In the lecture, the professor agrees that small quantities of DTT did not harm animals and human. Instead did a lot of good by killing unwanted insects and inclusive preventing the spread of malaria and typhus that mosquitoes carried at that time. In conclusion, the professor opinion is that DTT in small quantities does not harm any animals or humans.

Stop supporting animal cruelty.. Independent Essay TOEFL Hello guys, i am practicing my independent essay for my TOEFL ^^ . I found out this topic really interesting because i am an animal lover, if you feel this way also please take a look and if is possible give me your feedback and corrections also (y) I would be very happy to read you ^^ Thank you Nowadays we can find several beauty products that we look at them as innovating and necessary for our skin care or makeup routine. But are we conscious about how this product are made? Or how safety they are with the environment and wildlife? For me, the best way to stop one cause of animal cruelty is look at those common and popular brands that we use daily, because not all of them are good even for our health. This brands tested on animals because they are using chemicals that are not approved for organizations who regulates the chemicals that are already proven to be safe. In other words, this companies start testing on animals to create or innovate a formula or product. Nowadays, the majority of companies made vegan products because they found out these formulas are more safety for our skin. Not only that, testing on animals are illegal in several countries because of cruelty and also because there are other ways to ensure if the product is safety enough for our skin without making harm to any kind of life being. The reason there are still companies and countries that led this occur because it is cheaper than the other types of testers as synthetic skin for example. There are several reason of why we should use products that are cruelty free, besides of cruelty and lack of ethic from the companies. Firstly, because these kind of products use vegan ingredients that are safety and caring to any kind of skin. Secondly, because several brands wants raise awareness of this daily issue they sell their products at low prices, for example, E.L.F, Wt and Wild and Pacifica. And Finally if you are an eco friendly person, this is the best way to improve a daily routine without harming the world and becoming more conscious about how to be a better human being.

stop supporting animal cruelty Hello guys, i am practicing my independent essay for my TOEFL ^^ . I found out this topic really interesting because i am an animal lover, if you feel this way also please take a look and if is possible give me your feedback and corrections also (y) I would be very happy to read you ^^ Thank you Nowadays we can find several beauty products that we look at them as innovating and necessary for our skin care or makeup routine. But are we conscious about how this product are made? Or how safety they are with the environment and wildlife? For me, the best way to stop one cause of animal cruelty is look at those common and popular brands that we use daily, because not all of them are good even for our health. This brands tested on animals because they are using chemicals that are not approved for organizations who regulates the chemicals that are already proven to be safe. In other words, this companies start testing on animals to create or innovate a formula or product. Nowadays, the majority of companies made vegan products because they found out these formulas are more safety for our skin. Not only that, testing on animals are illegal in several countries because of cruelty and also because there are other ways to ensure if the product is safety enough for our skin without making harm to any kind of life being. The reason there are still companies and countries that led this occur because it is cheaper than the other types of testers as synthetic skin for example. There are several reason of why we should use products that are cruelty free, besides of cruelty and lack of ethic from the companies. Firstly, because these kind of products use vegan ingredients that are safety and caring to any kind of skin. Secondly, because several brands wants raise awareness of this daily issue they sell their products at low prices, for example, E.L.F, Wt and Wild and Pacifica. And Finally if you are an eco friendly person, this is the best way to improve a daily routine without harming the world and becoming more conscious about how to be a better human being.

advantages of geting married at an older age Hello guys, I am studying for my toefl test and I am practicing my writing skills by making an essay. This was the topic that I found essayer of all the options that I got from my book. I will love to get your feedback if you are agree or not so I will find a way how to write an essay that discuss both points of view ^^. Also your corrections and advices are welcome. advantages of getting marriage at an older age There are several advantages of getting married at an older age than a young age. Perhaps the main advantage is the maturity that a person acquire through achieving goals. To have reached maturity is essential for many reasons. One advantage of have reached maturity is that a couple will know what they want from the relationship. First of all both of them will talk about their goals within the relationship, like ; if they are expecting marriage so they can think about having kids when they feel economically ready for buying a house. In this way they are going to make an stable family. Another advantage is that they will accept and understand better each other by being patient with the differences that they will discover at the pass of time. The couple will learn how to be patient with their partner by communicating this things that they don't like from each other and making a better comprehensive bond and finally know how to figure it out the differences between each other by respecting their previously conversations and agreements through their past discussions. In conclusion, be mature before to start a relationship it has advantages to reach an stable bond. It's helps the couple know what they want from the relationship and how to accept and understand each other by figuring it out their differences through discussions over the pass of time. Thus, maturity is an advantage of thinking about marriage at an older age

why we shouldn't spent money at zoos practicing my writing (part 3 ) ^^ I would appreciate your corrections and feedback . Thanks a lot for your time. Wild animals should not be kept in captivity for many reasons. First, animals are often kept in poor and inhumane conditions inside their cages or small created habitats that deprives the animal from their normal environment. In addition, many suffer poor health from lack of exercise and exhibit frustration and stress through their neurotic behavior because of the lack of sufficient space. Also, some animals will not breed in captivity like the cheetahs, white rhynos and giant pandas, even if they got the resources, deprived them from it it's normal structure will don't let them do it. Those animals that make often do so with a close relative. In conclusion, money spent in the upkeep of zoos would be better spent in protecting habitats that let us enjoy and learn more about the wildlife without making any animal to suffer.

How can i use an airplane and a helicopter in an emergency? Hello guys👋😊 i am practicing my english i am trying to improve my writing skills. At the moment i just know hot to make an easy essay if it’s possible i would like your opinions below and corrections also of how can i write a conclusion for this essay. Thanks a lot for your time 🙏 Airplanes and Helicopters can be used to save people’s lives. Helicopters an be used for rescuing people in trouble. For example, medical emergencies, natural disasters, car accidents and to search missed people. Planes can transport food and supplies when disaster strikes as natural disaster like a big mudflow that destroy, houses, schools, environments and covers the road and streets so people could not go out from their refugies or escape from the rugged place to look for help or even food and water. Both types of aircraft can transport people to hospitals in emergencies. This is common when an accident happen far away from a hospital and the patient need to be attended the most quick as possible. Also not only for emergencies but helicopters and airplanes can be used to provide medical services to people who live in remote areas, like transporting a health personal or medicines for elderly and disabled people.

The importance of a tree Hello guys i am practicing my writing skills, and this is the first essay that i made by my own. I would be glad if a get your feedback about it and also your corrections 😊🙏 When you plant a tree, you are helping your environment in many ways. Your tree will provide a home and food for other creatures. Wildlife animals, like birds find a safety place from their hunters and a peaceful environment to make nests for their chicks. Also tress can provide several types of foods like seeds, insects, fruits and some roots. Not only birds can enjoy all the benefits that a tree provides also squirrels, lizards, insects, some snakes, monkeys and even humans. It will hold the soil in place , this means that the root of a tree that growth far gives better support against soil movements. It will provide shade in the summer, which it’s important to avoid the high level UV rays that could cause harm to the skin. You can watch it grow and someday show your children, or even grandchildren, the tree you planted.