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stop supporting animal cruelty Hello guys, i am practicing my independent essay for my TOEFL ^^ . I found out this topic really interesting because i am an animal lover, if you feel this way also please take a look and if is possible give me your feedback and corrections also (y) I would be very happy to read you ^^ Thank you Nowadays we can find several beauty products that we look at them as innovating and necessary for our skin care or makeup routine. But are we conscious about how this product are made? Or how safety they are with the environment and wildlife? For me, the best way to stop one cause of animal cruelty is look at those common and popular brands that we use daily, because not all of them are good even for our health. This brands tested on animals because they are using chemicals that are not approved for organizations who regulates the chemicals that are already proven to be safe. In other words, this companies start testing on animals to create or innovate a formula or product. Nowadays, the majority of companies made vegan products because they found out these formulas are more safety for our skin. Not only that, testing on animals are illegal in several countries because of cruelty and also because there are other ways to ensure if the product is safety enough for our skin without making harm to any kind of life being. The reason there are still companies and countries that led this occur because it is cheaper than the other types of testers as synthetic skin for example. There are several reason of why we should use products that are cruelty free, besides of cruelty and lack of ethic from the companies. Firstly, because these kind of products use vegan ingredients that are safety and caring to any kind of skin. Secondly, because several brands wants raise awareness of this daily issue they sell their products at low prices, for example, E.L.F, Wt and Wild and Pacifica. And Finally if you are an eco friendly person, this is the best way to improve a daily routine without harming the world and becoming more conscious about how to be a better human being.

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stop supporting animal cruelty

Hello guys, I am practicing my independent essay for my TOEFL ^^ . I found out this topic really interesting because I am an animal lover, if you feel this way also please take a look and if is possible give me your feedback and corrections also (y) I would be very happy to read you ^^ Thank you

Nowadays we can find several beauty products that we look at as innovating and necessary for our skin care or makeup routine. But are we conscious about how these products are made? Or how safe they are with the environment and wildlife?

For me, the best way to stop one cause of animal cruelty is to look at those common and popular brands that we use daily, because not all of them are good even for our health. These brands are tested on animals because they are using chemicals that are not approved for organizations who regulates the chemicals that are already proven to be safe. In other words, these companies start testing on animals to create or innovate a formula or product. Nowadays, the majority of companies make vegan products because they found out these formulas are safer for our skin.


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Not only that, testing on animals are illegal in several countries because of cruelty and also because there are other ways to ensure if the product is safety enough for our skin without making harm to any kind of life being. The reason there are still companies and countries that led this occur because it is cheaper than the other types of testers as synthetic skin for example.
There are several reason of why we should use products that are cruelty free, besides of cruelty and lack of ethic from the companies. Firstly, because these kind of products use vegan ingredients that are safety and caring to any kind of skin. Secondly, because several brands wants raise awareness of this daily issue they sell their products at low prices, for example, E.L.F, Wt and Wild and Pacifica. And Finally if you are an eco friendly person, this is the best way to improve a daily routine without harming the world and becoming more conscious about how to be a better human being.

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