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advantages of geting married at an older age Hello guys, I am studying for my toefl test and I am practicing my writing skills by making an essay. This was the topic that I found essayer of all the options that I got from my book. I will love to get your feedback if you are agree or not so I will find a way how to write an essay that discuss both points of view ^^. Also your corrections and advices are welcome. advantages of getting marriage at an older age There are several advantages of getting married at an older age than a young age. Perhaps the main advantage is the maturity that a person acquire through achieving goals. To have reached maturity is essential for many reasons. One advantage of have reached maturity is that a couple will know what they want from the relationship. First of all both of them will talk about their goals within the relationship, like ; if they are expecting marriage so they can think about having kids when they feel economically ready for buying a house. In this way they are going to make an stable family. Another advantage is that they will accept and understand better each other by being patient with the differences that they will discover at the pass of time. The couple will learn how to be patient with their partner by communicating this things that they don't like from each other and making a better comprehensive bond and finally know how to figure it out the differences between each other by respecting their previously conversations and agreements through their past discussions. In conclusion, be mature before to start a relationship it has advantages to reach an stable bond. It's helps the couple know what they want from the relationship and how to accept and understand each other by figuring it out their differences through discussions over the pass of time. Thus, maturity is an advantage of thinking about marriage at an older age

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Advantages of getting married at an older age

Hello guys, I am studying for my toefl test and I am practicing my writing skills by making an essay. This was the topic that I found easiest of all the options that I got from my book. I would love to get your feedback if you agree so I can practice how to write an essay that discusses both points of view. Also your corrections and advice are welcome.

Advantages of getting marriage at an older age

There are several advantages of getting married at an older age than a young age. Perhaps the main advantage is the maturity that a person acquires through achieving goals. To have reached maturity is essential for many reasons.

One advantage of having reached maturity is that a couple will know what they want from the relationship. First of all, both of them can talk about their goals within the relationship, such as if they are expecting marriage so they can think about having kids when they feel economically ready, or for buying a house. In this way they are going to make a stable family.

Another advantage is that they will accept and understand better each other by being patient with the differences that they will discover with the passing (or passage) of time. The couple will learn how to be patient with their partner by communicating things that they don't like from each other to make a more comprehensive bond. Finally it will help them to know how to figure out the differences between each other by respecting their previous conversations and agreements.

In conclusion, be mature before starting a relationship: it has advantages to help reach an stable bond. It helps the couple know what they want from the relationship and how to accept and understand each other by figuring it out their differences through discussions over the passage of time. Thus, maturity is an advantage in thinking about marriage at an older age.

En general, muy buen trabajo... Te adviso continuar leer en inglés... Despues un rato,sabrás automáticamente lo que suena correcto.  (Excusa mis errores)
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