The importance of a tree
Hello guys i am practicing my writing skills, and this is the first essay that i made by my own. I would be glad if a get your feedback about it and also your corrections 😊🙏
When you plant a tree, you are helping your environment in many ways. Your tree will provide a home and food for other creatures. Wildlife animals, like birds find a safety place from their hunters and a peaceful environment to make nests for their chicks. Also tress can provide several types of foods like seeds, insects, fruits and some roots. Not only birds can enjoy all the benefits that a tree provides also squirrels, lizards, insects, some snakes, monkeys and even humans. It will hold the soil in place , this means that the root of a tree that growth far gives better support against soil movements. It will provide shade in the summer, which it’s important to avoid the high level UV rays that could cause harm to the skin. You can watch it grow and someday show your children, or even grandchildren, the tree you planted.
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The importance of a tree
Hello guys i am practicing my writing skills, and this is the first essay that i made by my own. I would be glad if a get your feedback about it and also your corrections 😊🙏
When you plant a tree, you are helping your environment in many ways. Your tree will provide a home and food for other creatures. Wildlife animals, like birds, find a safe place from hunters and a peaceful environment to make nests for their chicks. Also, trees can provide several types of foods like seeds, insects, fruits and some roots. Not only birds can enjoy all the benefits that a tree provides - so can squirrels, lizards, insects, some snakes, monkeys and even humans. It will hold the soil in place, this means that the root of a tree that grows far gives better support against soil movements. It will provide shade in the summer, which it’s important to avoid the high level UV rays that could cause harm to the skin. You can watch it grow and someday show your children, or even grandchildren, the tree you planted.
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Your first essay?! Awesome job! Muy bien!
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