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Zai "Ao Nang"
<strike>Women zai andaman de hai'an, zai haitan de cheng jiao "Ao Nang". </strike>wo men zai Andaman qun dao de yige jiao "AO Nang"de yan hai xiao cheng zhen shang.
Zheer de tianqi gen "Koh Kood" <strike>de tianqi </strike>yi yang, jihu mei tian dou xia yu. Haitan hen mei, <strike>danshi hai shui de shi xian bu hao guo4.</strike> dan shi hai shui yi dian dou bu qing che.
<strike>Yaoshi ni xiang fuqian (haishi "huxiguan"?) jiu ni xuyao qu yuan de daoyu lvxing. </strike>yao shi ni xiang qian yong (huo ze jiao qian shui ),ni jiu xuyao dao li zhe er hen yuan de bie de dao yu shang qu.<strike>Haitan fujin shuimu ling mei you,</strike>haitan fujin mei you shuimu he bai ling, <strike>yaoshi xia yu huo women shai shang le, jiu women neng duo shiqing zuo</strike>. yao shi bu xia yu,huo ze wo men bu pa bei shuai hei ,women ke yi zuo hen duo shiqing.(this English sentense I can't understand ,what do you want to express? because of raining or sunburnting ,you can do many things?or you were afraid of the raining or sunburnting ,you can't do many things,so I corrected with my mind,I think all girls shoul be afraid of sunburnting,hehe,if I am wrong,please tell me)
Women zu le yiliang motuoche <strike>le,</strike> <strike>suoyi neng qu mai donxi zai cheng fujin</strike>, suoyi women neng dao fujin de chengzhen qu mai dongxi,<strike>mai anmo,</strike> wo men hai qu anmo , qu senlin wan, <strike>shandong li you Fo de diaoxiang,</strike> qu canguan you fu xiang de shan dong, qu pao wenquan <strike>cheng</strike>, <strike>duo ban shui mei you de pubu lvxing. </strike>wo men hai youwan le da bu fen mei you shui de pubu.
<strike>Mingtian women yao likai ye qu yong motuoche yanzhe haitan dao "Ranong, cheng zai Myanmar de bianjie, lvxing. </strike>ming tian wo men yao likai Ao Nang le ,wo men da suan qi motuo che yan zhe hai tan yi zhi dao RaNong,na li yijing dao Myanmar de bian jian le.
Here's the English:
We are on the andaman coast, in a beach-town called "Ao Nang".
Compared to the island of Koh kood, the weather is the same, it rains almost every day.
The beach is beautiful, but the water has no visibility at all.
If one wants to snorkel, one has to go on a tour to far-away islands. There are no jellyfish near the beach, no sandflies, and if it rains or if we are sunburnt we can do many things.
We rented a scooter and we can go shopping in a nearby town, or go have a massage, or visit forests, caves with Buddha statues, hot springs and mostly water-less waterfalls.
Tomorrow we'll leave and go on a scooter-tour all along the coast til Ranong, at the border with Myanmar.0 votedDecember 26, 20100多加班，少减肥
今天是周六，下个周一到周三都是假日（你要用“和”的话，给我的感觉就只有下周一和周三是假日，周二就不放假了，但听你说未来五天都是假日，也就是周六到下周三连放五天，就要用"到"，就象英语中要用from next Monday to Wednesday ,而不能用 next Monday and Wednesday）。所以昨天上午我在想：我未来五天有很多休息时间，能睡很多懒觉。
但是，我在一个格软件公司工作。不得不加班！
下个周四一个客户要看看我们的办公室。他也要看软件的结果。
因为我们还没有结果，这个很长的假期我不能休息，不得不加班。
没问题，我太习惯加班！
我明天跟朋友要去参观博物馆。今天上午自己准备了很好吃的意大利蛋糕：tiramisu。我刚才发现用google “tiramisu” 翻译 ：提拉米苏.
你们知道“提拉米苏”吗？
在意大利语 tiramisu的意思是 “这个东西要拉我，要鼓励我”。
我必须加班时，很喜欢吃蛋糕。我吃蛋糕的时候，蛋糕就鼓励我，所以我认为我不太伤心。
总体来说，你的中文很好，写得非常好，我只是把你语法上有一些不妥的地方适当修改一下，非常好，不错，加油！0 votedDecember 5, 20100回到日本时买的礼物
从美国去日本出差或玩儿的时候，我大概给照顾我的人们买礼物。
以前的话，我能买在日本不卖的东西。比如说，葡萄酒，巧克力等等。
可是，最近在日本卖的东西是跟美国差不多一样的。
所以，选择适当的礼物很难。
这段话，我会修改成：
“我去日本出差或旅游的时候，我一般都会给我的亲朋好友买礼物。
以前的话，我能买到很多日本好的东西，比如说，葡萄酒，巧克力等等。
可是，最近在日本买到的东西感觉跟美国差不多。
所以，现在都不晓得买什么好了。选择适当的礼物很难。”
大概能看懂，但里面有一些小细节的问题，需要适当修改。“从美国去日本出差或玩儿的时候”这句话最好有个主语，就是“我”，另外通常中国人在说去哪个地方玩或出差的时候，如果你就站在这个地方，一般不会把所在的地方说出来，除非你在另一个地方说到这个事情。所以，我们都会说“我去哪里玩，我去哪里出差”，不会说“我从哪里到哪里去玩”
“我大概给照顾我的人们买礼物”，这句话“大概”用的不对，可以用“一般或通常”。还有，“照顾我的人们”也不太妥，你想表达的就是你身边的家人，朋友或亲戚，同事，同学之类的，那可以用“亲朋好友”代替所有跟你关系好的人。
“以前的话，我能买在日本不卖的东西。比如说，葡萄酒，巧克力等等。”这句话，其他都尚可，但这个“我能买在日本不卖的东西”，会让人有误解，你想表达的是什么意思？从你下文的意思我猜你是想说我在日本能买到日本好的东西，也就是说这么好吃，这种味道的葡萄酒和巧克力只能在日本买到，在其他国家买不到。不知道我说的对不对？
“可是，最近在日本卖的东西是跟美国差不多一样的”，这句话，顺着上句话的意思，这个“卖”稍微改一下，这句话是你在描述在日本买东西的事情，所以用“买”更顺一点。
最后一句，还不错，稍微加一句，就更能表达你选礼物的难处了。0 votedDecember 3, 20100Chinese please
Hi Im coming to China next year and i would like ot learn the language please. I can also teach English . Any age ,,
明年我要去中国，我很想学习中文，我也能教英文，any age.
Is this your meaning,you want someone translate this sentence in chinese ,and you want to find a person who can teaches you Chinese?0 votedDecember 2, 20100- Rough Luck When I came back my home yesterday evening,it was ten clock.After I had have a bath and gone to bed,I reminded that my cellphone was left in my car.So I brought key of my home,and went to the stopping place where under the floor .When I want to open the car ,OH,my dear,I forget the car key,my poor memory.I only went back.The foolist thing ,this time I put the home's key into my bag and picked the car's key from my bag then went out of my home .I had the cellphone but I was not able to let me in .What a woeful eveining.What a foolish me!December 1, 201060
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