First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi,nice to meet you here,I come from China,my English is not good ,I want to improve my English level,so I can chat with foreign fluently and can read English book or magazine,I also can surf in English website.

Correction :

Hi, nice to meet you here. I come from China. My English is not good. So I want to improve the level of my English proficiency. By doing so, I will be able to chat with foreigners in fluent English, read English books and magazines and suft English websites.

Red : Important note

1. You must have a full stop at the end of each sentence.

2. It's better to put the cohesive device (So/Therefore/Thus) after your reason (My English is not good).

3. "I want to improve my English level." - The sentence structure is wrong.
    Correction : "I want to improve the level of my English proficiency."

4. can = 可以, will be able to = 就有能力去 - This is more aptly.

5. "chat with foreign fluently" - The sentence structure is wrong.
    Correction : "chat with foreigners in fluent English"
    * foreigner = 外国人

6. The three things (chat with foreigners in fluent English, read English books and magazines, and
    surf English websites.) you can put together in one sentence because they are under the same
    reason.