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Everyday Idioms all in one sentence.
After I’d tried on roughly 10 different outfits clothes as of yet, my friend Chloe , my friend, reminded me it’s time to go to the restaurant I wait on and suggested that I me to put today’s party off for the time being rather than calling it off for good.----
You made many of the idioms work well in the sentence, but here are a few notes to make it more natural:
'As of yet' really sounds awkward here even if it is moved to a different part of the sentence. Clothes are usually an unnumbered item, unless you say '10 pieces of clothing' or '10 outfits'. Changing the phrasing to 'my friend Chloe' makes the sentence more clear. I do not know what you mean by 'restaurant I wait on', maybe you mean 'the restaurant we have a reservation with'?
0 votedJuly 26, 20181Cherry blossoms
It's the season for cherry blossoms in my country.
Two weeks ago, I went to Arashiyama, Kyoto, to see the cherry blossoms. The place is really famous for very beautiful views. ['really' and 'very' in the same sentence can be considered redundant or simplistic. ] Unfortunately, only about 40 percent of the flowers were blooming blossoms were only about 40 percent.
I had been eager to see the fantastic view in full of pink and green, but it I seemed it was too early to go there. [the timing, 'it', was too early to see the fantastic view. If you use 'I' here use one of Chad's suggestions]
Luckily, I was able to see them at another place last Sunday! I had really pleasant [or, 'comfortable'] cozy and peaceful time there. Do you like cherry trees? [Your wording is ok here, but 'cozy' is an adjective similar to 'snug' or 'warm' and does not usually describe time unless it is spent near a fireplace and holding a cat. Although, that might be the atmosphere you are trying to convey ;-) ]----
Yes, I love cherry trees. I didn't see them in bloom at Arashiyama when I went though, because I visited in the fall. I still enjoyed the beautiful views at that time, and would love to go back some time.
0 votedApril 3, 201812/2
My building had a trash chute, but the neighbors decided take it out a few years ago. I have an old woman neighbor who always complains because these buildings have no elevators and she doesn't like going up and down the stairs every<font color="#000000" style="font-size: 10.6667px;"> </font>day. None of <font color="#000000" style="font-size: 10.6667px;">these</font> buildings <font color="#000000" style="font-size: 10.6667px;">have</font> swimming pools, either, but some of them have courtyards. My home doesn't have air conditioners, <font color="#000000" style="font-size: 10.6667px;">but</font>, we have fans in each bedroom and I sometimes think my apartment needs air conditioning. Many years ago every building had a large trash bin at the entrance, but the government <font color="#000000" style="font-size: 10.6667px;">took</font> them out many years ago<font color="#000000" style="font-size: 10.6667px;">.</font> so <font color="#000000" style="font-size: 10.6667px;">Now</font> people take out the garbage to the main street.
0 votedApril 3, 20180I live in a city called Valencia, located in Venezuela. The urban area urbanization where I live is named La Isabelica. There are so many apartment buildings of the same pattern but each with different colors, each one. There are also too as well as many houses here. <font color="#000000">All the buildings here have three floors. </font><font color="#ff0000">[moved sentence for better paragraph progression]</font> I live in an apartment on the second floor. all the buildings here have three floors. It isn't common to see buildings with roof gardens in La Isabelica, or anywhere in .In fact, the same happens over all the country.<font color="#ff0000"> </font><font color="#ff0000">[This correction is my best guess of your intent] </font>My building doesn't have a neither any fire escape or a fire exit, you know they are because it is a very old buildings. However,Besides, there is a security system at the entrance which ensures that only the people with a digital key can enter the building. Because of this, On the other hand, it isn't necessary to have both an intercom and a speaker. We also have a garage with that has a security gate which opens only with a remote control to enter the parking space.
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These apartments are very comfortable, so I'm writing this note on the dining room table at one of the five dining room chairs. There's a beautiful tablecloth my mom bought. This table has five dining room chairs, so I'm sitting on one of them. My mom She loves birds, so she always put some rice outside near the window. Birds of all kinds come to be fed on the balcony every day. I remember when I was a child, when <font color="#000000">anyone</font> came to visit us and the door was shut, I always looked through over the peephole and had to wait <font color="#000000">for </font>that my mom <font color="#000000">to </font>was com<font color="#000000">e </font>ing over to <font color="#000000">before I could </font>turn the doorknob.0 votedApril 3, 20181Practice for job interview
1. I have many experience s to meeting many customers every day while I have working at a food store for 1 year and 3 months. And I always try to be friendly to customers and I enjoy it.
2. When I meet customers, I always try to be kindly, but sometimes, when we have a lot of orders, some customers can complaint for about their long wait. To prevent this First of all, I prepare them all of that case, I can by telling them in advance that there may be a wait. And Also, if when they complaint about it, I apologize as soon as possible and I try to fix it politely. And The best way to deal with the customers is that I try to think as a customer on the opposite sideway.
3. Thanks you for giving me an interview opportunity. My name is Jion Yun. I have worked at a food court for 1 year and 3 months. I work at Pizza Hut as a food service worker, making and selling pizzas.
While I work, I have felt a passion for service. Sometimes I feel grateful for of my work.
I am especially interested in this sales associate position where I can apply my service experience.
4. I am the right person for this position because I have good concentration and I am hard working.
And I have genuine interested in service and I have a passion for it. I have a lot of working experience in service roles area as well. I will try to do my best to be the right perfect person for this position.[Hi Jion! I put red and strikethrough on a few very small marks so you don't miss those little corrections. At the end you can say 'perfect person' instead of 'the right person' if you prefer, it is just a common usage preference although your original grammar is also correct. I wish you all the best in your job interview!]
0 votedMarch 3, 20181As citizens of a former colony and a developing nation, Brazilians are used to confusions between the public and (the) private spheres. This was intensified by the a rather recent development of democratic institutions, including the Constitution itself, which is only 26 years old. Such (a)This recent institutional maturing allowed the Brazilian State to become conscious of realities that resemble that of fragile states.
0 votedMarch 3, 20180Hello there, could someone help correct these the paragraphs please? Thank you!
My dog's name is Huanhuan, which means happy. She is a Samoyed and has completely white hair.
She is naughty, always stealing stole food such as chicken, a mutton chop, a sports drink (I don't know how she twisted off the cap), peanuts, some of my uncle's tablets of my uncle, melon seeds, dried apricot slices, yoghourt and so on.
My uncle stays with her every day from morning till night, but cannot stop her from stealing things. Maybe she's just feels like trying to eating everything.
Although Though she is naughty and always makes trouble, I don't want to give her a lecture since she's so cute.
0 votedFebruary 10, 20180Three Billboards Outside Ebbing, Missouri is a social movie, actually a drama of about a woman who lost her daughter. dauthers It is a critical crucial problem of our society when mothers lose lost their children and the faceless police system behind face of police doesn't work. But, if by when some accident it will eventually be solved, happen that will changes every single life. live Law and truth in the end will have won.
Let's eliminate the hate.0 votedFebruary 10, 20181
