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Practice Hello there, could someone help correct the paragraph please? Thank you !

My dog's name is Huanhuan, which means happy. She is a Samoyed and has completely white hair.

She is naughty , always stole food such as chicken, mutton chop, sports drink(I don't know how she twisted off the cap), peanuts, tablets of my uncle, melon seeds, dried apricot slices, yoghourt and so on.

My uncle stay with her everyday from morning till night , but cannot stop her from stealing things, maybe she's just feel like trying eating everything .

Though she is naughty and always make trouble, I don't want to give her a lecture since she's so cute.

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Hello there, could someone help correct the paragraph please? Thank you !

My dog's name is Huanhuan, which means happy. She is a Samoyed and has completely white hair.

She is naughty , always steals food such as chicken, mutton chop, sports drink(I don't know how she twisted off the cap), peanuts, tablets of my uncle, melon seeds, dried apricot slices, yoghourt and so on.

My uncle stays with her everyday from morning till night , but cannot stop her from stealing things. Maybe she's just trying to eat everything .

Though she is naughty and always makes trouble, I don't want to give her a lecture since she's so cute.

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Hello there, could someone help correct these the paragraphs please? Thank you!

My dog's name is Huanhuan, which means happy. She is a Samoyed and has completely white hair.

She is naughty, always stealing stole food such as chicken, a mutton chop, a sports drink (I don't know how she twisted off the cap), peanuts, some of my uncle's tablets of my uncle, melon seeds, dried apricot slices, yoghourt and so on.

My uncle stays with her every day from morning till night, but cannot stop her from stealing things. Maybe she's just feels like trying to eating everything.

Although Though she is naughty and always makes trouble, I don't want to give her a lecture since she's so cute.

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