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My Apartment Building I live in a city called Valencia, located in Venezuela. The urbanization where I live is named La Isabelica. There are so many apartment buildings of the same pattern but with different colors each one. There are also too many houses here. I live in an apartment on the second floor, all the buildings here have three floors. It isn't common to see buildings with roof garden in La Isabelica. In fact, the same happens over all the country. My building doesn't have neither any fire escape nor a fire exit, you know they are very old buildings. Besides, there is a security system at the entrance which ensures that only the people with a digital key can enter the building. On the other hand, it isn't necessary to have both an intercom and a speaker. We also have a garage that has a security gate which opens only with a remote control to enter the parking space. These apartments are very comfortable, so I'm writing this note on the dining room table. There's a beautiful tablecloth my mom bought. This table has five dining room chairs, so I'm sitting on one of them. My mom loves birds, so she always put some rice near the window. Birds of all kinds come to be fed on the balcony everyday. I remember when I was a child, when someone came to visit us and the door was shut, I always looked over the peephole and had to wait that my mom was coming over to turn the doorknob. My building had a trash chute, but the neighbors decided take it out a few years ago. I have an old woman neighbor who always complains because these buildings have no elevators and she doesn't like going up and down the stairs everyday. None of this buildings has swimming pools, either, but some of them have courtyards. My house doesn't have air conditioners, however, we have fans in each bedroom but I sometimes think my apartment needs air conditioning. Many years ago every building had a large trash bin at the entrance, but the government take them out many years ago, so people take out the garbage to the main street.

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I live in a city called Valencia, located in Venezuela. The urban area urbanization where I live is named La Isabelica. There are so many apartment buildings of the same pattern but each with different colors, each one. There are also too as well as many houses here. All the buildings here have three floors. [moved sentence for better paragraph progression] I live in an apartment on the second floor. all the buildings here have three floors. It isn't common to see buildings with roof gardens in La Isabelica, or anywhere in .In fact, the same happens over all the country. [This correction is my best guess of your intent] My building doesn't have a neither any fire escape or a fire exit, you know they are because it is a very old buildings. However,Besides, there is a security system at the entrance which ensures that only the people with a digital key can enter the building. Because of this, On the other hand, it isn't necessary to have both an intercom and a speaker. We also have a garage with that has a security gate which opens only with a remote control to enter the parking space. 

These apartments are very comfortable, so I'm writing this note on the dining room table at one of the five dining room chairs. There's a beautiful tablecloth my mom bought. This table has five dining room chairs, so I'm sitting on one of them. My mom She loves birds, so she always put some rice outside near the window. Birds of all kinds come to be fed on the balcony every day. I remember when I was a child, when anyone came to visit us and the door was shut, I always looked through over the peephole and had to wait for that my mom to was come ing over to before I could turn the doorknob. 

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My Apartment Building

I live in a city called Valencia, located in Venezuela. The area where I live in is named/called La Isabelica. There are so many apartment buildings with the same pattern but with different colors each one. There are also too many houses here/*There are also many houses here. I live in an apartment on the second floor, all the buildings here have three floors. It isn't common to see buildings with a roof garden in La Isabelica. In fact, the same happens over all the country. My building doesn't have (neither) any fire escape nor a fire exit. You know they are very old buildings. Besides, there is a security system at the entrance which ensures that only the people with a digital key can enter the building. On the other hand, it isn't necessary to have both an intercom and a speaker. We also have a garage that has a security gate which opens only with a remote control to enter the parking space.

These apartments are very comfortable, so I'm writing this entry on the dining room table. There's a beautiful tablecloth my mom bought. This table has five dining room chairs, so/and I'm sitting on one of them. My mom loves birds, so she always put some rice near the window. Birds of all kinds come to be fed on the balcony everyday. I remember when I was a child, when someone came to visit us and the door was shut, I would always look through the peephole and had to wait until my mom came over to turn the doorknob/to open the door.

My building had a trash chute, but the neighbors decided take it out a few years ago. I have an old woman neighbor who always complains because these buildings have no elevators and she doesn't like going up and down the stairs everyday. None of these buildings have swimming pools, either, but some of them have courtyards. My house doesn't have air conditioners, however, we have fans in each bedroom, but I sometimes think my apartment needs air conditioning. Many years ago every building had a large trash bin at the entrance, but the government took them out many years ago. So, now people take out the garbage to the main street.


*Original sentence sounds like you're annoyed because there are many houses.


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My building had a trash chute, but the neighbors decided take it out a few years ago. I have an old woman neighbor who always complains because these buildings have no elevators and she doesn't like going up and down the stairs every day. None of these buildings have swimming pools, either, but some of them have courtyards. My home doesn't have air conditioners, but, we have fans in each bedroom and I sometimes think my apartment needs air conditioning. Many years ago every building had a large trash bin at the entrance, but the government took them out many years ago. so Now people take out the garbage to the main street.

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