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- Japanese question: How/When to use は (wa/ha), が(ga), を(wo) in a sentence. Hello! I am just starting out learning Japanese. I am getting confused on when to use wa, ga, and wo. Why is "Ga" sometimes used in place of "Wa" near the beginning of a sentence? When/why do you sometimes place "wo" towards the end of the sentence? Example: toriniku to pan wo tabemasu (とりにくとぱんをたべます） Why is the "Wo" there? Thank you for your help and your time! :)December 1, 2017130
My tiny world
Every day I have to go to Alkestan school by bus. It's quite far from my house. I live in a safe neighborhood, but we still have a lot of bars on our house. anyway our house has a lot of bars. Our district was dangerous 10 years ago, but since then we haven't had any problems. Since that time, I have a habit to examine the house before leaving. I can faint I get worried(the word "faint" doesn't really apply to this situation in American English.) if I realize, in the bus, that I didn't check the bars. Sad but true...
I start my day with the perfect sense of wakefulness. Being wakeful is one of my main principles. I'd would not like to live with miserable energy and wishes to do something. I eat a lot of food without sugar. Yes, guys, sugar is like a drug. After breakfast, I knock on my the parents' room and wake them up. My dad is always thoughtful in the morning. He's been working as a manager for 7 years, and he has to deal with different customers. He hadn't worked in this area before he found this job. Usually my mum is puzzled in the mornings, because it''s not easy to get up for her at 7 o'clock. One time I've persuaded her to do that every day to have more time to enjoy her life. In addition to this, she's fine after 5 minutes of her wakefulness, and she's ready to make jokes about dad and whisper them for to me.
My town is located in the northern part of the world. Here's it is dark all the day in winter and bright in summer. We should use candles in the house in winter. I fetch different cakes without sugar after school and consider how to beautify them for my parents. I fill the hollows in the cakes up by syrup. The syrup is useful for your health, especially if you have a fever.Notes:
Really well done!
"I can faint..." When you said this, are you meaning, "I feel like I will faint.." or are you meaning "worried"? I corrected this thinking you were meaning, "I feel worried." However, if I was wrong, I apologize.
0 votedDecember 1, 20171[My Trip in Sapporo City. 116]
Would you mind correcting my essay? If you were me, how would
you go about writing it?
Which part should I describe in detail? I hope my explanations are clear. I hope you can understand them.
(Part Eleven)
[The Historical Village of Hokkaido]
The place was opened in April 1983 with the objective of providing an experiential understanding of the lifestyle of the pioneer days and conserving the buildings representative of periodic cultures for posterity.
Everything in the village is an exhibit. The exhibits provide glimpses of the early days in Hokkaido, and of the wisdom and hard work of our forefathers.
I really like that. There are so many variety varieties of exhibits: buildings, houses, and (the word "and" is not necessary when using etc) etc. You can feel different cultural backgrounds in them, instead of Kyoto and Tokyo.
When I visit new city cities and places, I always try to see museums, art-museums and historical attractions.Note:
This is really well done! You were very easy to understand. Your content is interesting. I also LOVE the photo!
If I were writing this essay, I would start off this portion by saying, "The Historical Village of Hokkaido was opened in April 1983.....".
"There are so many varieties of exhibits: buildings, houses, etc." With this sentence, there are a few other options that can be used.
"There are so many varieties of exhibits, namely buildings, houses, etc." or "There are so many varieties of exhibits, such as buildings, houses, etc." I, personally, use "such as" more than "namely". I hope this helps!! :)
0 votedDecember 1, 20170about me
안녕하세요 저는 ㅇㅇㅇ 입니다. 저는 2형제중 막내이며 가족들이 관심과 사랑을 잔뜩 받고 살아왔습니다.
Hello, my name is OOO, you can call me OO, I have an one older brother and my parents. in my family
therefore I am the youngest one in my family accordingly, and I have been loved.
그러다 보니 자연스레 제 성격은 밝아 지고 활동적인 사람이 돼었습니다.
so then it This has made me a really positive and active person.
그러한 이유로 저는 사람만나는 걸 좋아하고 평소에 최소 일주일에 한번은 친구를 만나며
consequently I really love to meet my friends and peeple people. So when I am free , I usually meet my friends at least once a week.
하고자 하는 일도 활동적이고 사람을 만나는 서비스 직인 승무원을 준비하고 있습니다.
So with these reasons, currently I am currently planning to be work cabin crew, and I am sure I will love this job.
또 다른 취미로는 사진 찍기가 있는데 평소에 찍으러 다닐 때 친구나 가족을 데리러가려고 한답니다.
and I love taking pictures then and I try to take my friends or my family with me to take photography as often as I can.Note:
Great job!!! :D I could understand you very well. Just a few notes: Remember "I" will always be capitalized, no matter where it is in the sentence. Remember to capitalize after a period(.). :)
Photography is really fun! What type of photography do you do?
0 votedNovember 30, 20170The english is difficult to me
I'm practising practicing English, but it is difficult for me. When I watch a movie or listen to some song, I can understand some phrases or words, more or less. But it is difficult, because I read the worlds; however, but in my head, they sound like I would pronounce in Spanish.Note: Good job!! English is very difficult to learn. You are doing great! I could understand you very clearly. :)
0 votedNovember 30, 20171I H have a Baby
I have a baby. His name is Li Chen. He's two months now. He's a bit fat. He's a cute boy with small eyes.
He likes smiling at me. When I speak to him, he smiles. When I play with him, he smiles. But when he feels uncomfortable, he cries, he will 蹬手蹬脚。
I like taking photos of him. There are lots of pictures in my smartphone. I hope him he to grows up quickly, then I can take him to all the places he wants to go. We can fly kites in spring, we can swim in the sea, we can play football in autumn, and we can make a snowman in winter.
I love my baby very much.Note:
Awww! This is so sweet! You did wonderful on this! Your little baby sounds so cute!! You sound like a very good mother. :) Just one note: Remember to add spaces after commas (,) and periods (.). Great job!!
0 votedNovember 30, 20171- こんばんは！ こんばんは, わたしなまえわこりなです！はじめまして！ アメリカ人です。私はTexasに住んでいます。二十二歳です。うたいますとおどりますはすきです！わたしはにほんごをべんきようします。まだじじよずじやありません。よんでくれてありがとうございます。 This is what I was trying to say: Good evening! My name is Korina! It's nice to meet you! I'm American. I live in Texas. I'm twenty-two years old. I like to sing and dance. I am studying Japanese, but I'm not good at it yet. Thank you so much for reading this. :)November 30, 2017101
What is music?
Every day we listen to music. But have we ever wondering wondered what is music? How is born it it born? From where born our necessity to listen it and create it? ("From where do we have this necessity to listen to it and create it?") I think it's interesting to know this. Music is different than other art. You cannot see it, you cannot touch it. Is It's the melody of our mood, of our thoughts, our impression. If I can give a definition of music, I guess I could say: " It's the sound of our silence". Every day, I reflect my silence in a melody. Every day, the music is with me. When I cannot listen, It I think about a song. It's a pity that I don't have a music talent. But I appreciate a lot of this art. The art of our soul.Note:
This is very poetic! I love it! I'm a major music lover. I sing, play guitar, piano, and flute. I understand how necessary music is. Have you ever been on the app/website, "Smule"? They have singing apps, and piano apps. It's a fun way to listen to music and play music. :)
0 votedNovember 30, 20171Report: Learning about new technology
Our goal:
This year, on in early July, I went to Barcelona with my coworkers to attend a conference about a new version of Spring. The conference included a lot of talks for all day which lasted the entire day. Just in case, you don’t know Spring, I will explain what Spring is. In To be brief, it is one of the most known application frameworks, and it is used to develop backend applications. Maybe, if you don’t have any knowledge about computers science, you don’t know it. Going to to Getting to the point, our goal was to know (A better word to use would be "learn") new, interesting and exciting things that this framework was going to release in the next version. We wanted to be ahead from of other important companies. In my job, it is very important to be up-to-date, because new technology appears every day.
What we did:
We listened a lot of speaks speeches done by the most important people of Spring, such as, the Spring’s project leader. In spite of delays, there were a lot of interesting speaks speeches. and even there were other talks There were even discussions that were not related to Spring, but they were also amazing as well as interesting. After the talks, my coworkers and I shared our notes with each other to take conclusions about what we were seeing for all day to reach a conclusion about what we learned that day. (I'm honestly not too sure how to properly word this, because I'm not 100% sure on what exactly you were trying to say. Hopefully, I got this right. If not, I hope that another English speaker can better word this sentence. I apologize.) By summarizing, we learnt learned a lot! My boss wasn’t able to come, because he was very busy and had a lot of meetings here in Spain. (Another way to say this would be: "My boss wasn't able to come, because he was very busy with meetings here in Spain.") and Finally, he decided to trust us to bring up some notes from the conference.
Comments:
In conclusion, the conference was great, because we could try a lot of new things. and I would recommend it to anyone. On the other hand, I also consider it quite important to attend to these kind of conferences to improve your skills.Notes:
This was really well done! I can tell that you have spent many hours studying English!
The phrase/word "a lot" is more of a slang term. It is used often, especially in Texas. It's commonly used in casual conversation. However, "a lot" is not commonly used for business documents, essays, or professional articles. "We listened to many speeches..." "By summarizing, we learned so much..." These are examples of different alternatives that could be used in place "a lot".
"Speech" is the proper word for when someone talks to a group about a specific topic.
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