I Have a Baby
I have a baby.His name is Li Chen.He's two months now.He's a bit fat.He's a cute boy with small eyes.
He likes smiling at me .When I speak to him,he smiles.When I play with him,he smiles.But when he feels uncomfortable,he cries,he will 蹬手蹬脚。
I like taking photos of him.There are lots of pictures in my smartphone.I hope him to grow up quickly,then I can take him to all the places he wants to go.We can fly kites in spring,we can swim in the sea,we can play football in autumn,and we can make a snowman in winter.
I love my baby very much.
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I H have a Baby
I have a baby. His name is Li Chen. He's two months now. He's a bit fat. He's a cute boy with small eyes.He likes smiling at me. When I speak to him, he smiles. When I play with him, he smiles. But when he feels uncomfortable, he cries, he will 蹬手蹬脚。
I like taking photos of him. There are lots of pictures in my smartphone. I hope him he to grows up quickly, then I can take him to all the places he wants to go. We can fly kites in spring, we can swim in the sea, we can play football in autumn, and we can make a snowman in winter.
I love my baby very much.
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Awww! This is so sweet! You did wonderful on this! Your little baby sounds so cute!! You sound like a very good mother. :) Just one note: Remember to add spaces after commas (,) and periods (.). Great job!!
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I have a baby.His name is Li Chen.He's two months now.He's a bit fat.He's a cute boy with small eyes. He likes smiling at me .When I speak to him,he smiles.When I play with him,he smiles.But when he feels uncomfortable,he cries,he will 蹬手蹬脚。 I like taking photos of him.There are lots of pictures in my smartphone.I hope (he will) grow up quickly, then I can take him to all the places he wants to go.We can fly kites in spring,we can swim in the sea,we can play football in autumn,and we can make a snowman in winter. I love my baby very much.
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