My tiny world
Every day I have to go to Alkestan school by bus. I's quite far from my house. I live in a safe neighborhood but anyway our house has a lot of bars. Our district was dangerous 10 years ago but since then we haven't had any problems. Since that time I have a habbit to examine the house before leaving. I can faint if I realize in the bus that I didn't check the bars. Sad but true...
I start my day with the perfect sense of wakefulness. Being wakeful is one of my main principles. I'd not like to live with miserable energy and wishes to do something. I eat a lot of food without sugar. Yes, guys, sugar is like a drug. After breakfast I knock the parents' room and wake them up. My dad is always thougthful in the morning. He's been working as a manager for 7 years and he has to deal with different customers. He hadn't worked in this area before he found this job. Usually my mum is puzzled in the mornings because it''s not easy to get up for her at 7 o'clock. One time I've persuaded her to do that every day to have more time to enjoy her life. In addition to this, she's fine after 5 minutes of her wakefulness and she's ready to make jokes about dad and whisper them for me.
My town is located in the northern part of the world. Here's dark all the day in winter and bright in summer. We should use candles in the house in winter. I fetch different cakes without sugar after school and cosider how to beautify them for my parents. I fill the hollows in the cakes up by syrup. The syrup is usefull for your health, especially if you have a fever.
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My tiny world
Every day I have to go to Alkestan school by bus. It's quite far from my house. I live in a safe neighborhood, but we still have a lot of bars on our house. anyway our house has a lot of bars. Our district was dangerous 10 years ago, but since then we haven't had any problems. Since that time, I have a habit to examine the house before leaving. I can faint I get worried(the word "faint" doesn't really apply to this situation in American English.) if I realize, in the bus, that I didn't check the bars. Sad but true...I start my day with the perfect sense of wakefulness. Being wakeful is one of my main principles. I'd would not like to live with miserable energy and wishes to do something. I eat a lot of food without sugar. Yes, guys, sugar is like a drug. After breakfast, I knock on my the parents' room and wake them up. My dad is always thoughtful in the morning. He's been working as a manager for 7 years, and he has to deal with different customers. He hadn't worked in this area before he found this job. Usually my mum is puzzled in the mornings, because it''s not easy to get up for her at 7 o'clock. One time I've persuaded her to do that every day to have more time to enjoy her life. In addition to this, she's fine after 5 minutes of her wakefulness, and she's ready to make jokes about dad and whisper them for to me.
My town is located in the northern part of the world. Here's it is dark all the day in winter and bright in summer. We should use candles in the house in winter. I fetch different cakes without sugar after school and consider how to beautify them for my parents. I fill the hollows in the cakes up by syrup. The syrup is useful for your health, especially if you have a fever.
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Really well done!
"I can faint..." When you said this, are you meaning, "I feel like I will faint.." or are you meaning "worried"? I corrected this thinking you were meaning, "I feel worried." However, if I was wrong, I apologize.
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