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South Korea flagHwan Young
about me 안녕하세요 저는 ㅇㅇㅇ 입니다. 저는 2형제중 막내이며 가족들이 관심과 사랑을 잔뜩 받고 살아왔습니다. hello my name is OOO, you can call me OO, i have an one older brother and my parents in my family therefore i am the youngest one in my family accordingly i have been loved 그러다 보니 자연스레 제 성격은 밝아 지고 활동적인 사람이 돼었습니다. so then it made me really positive and active person 그러한 이유로 저는 사람만나는 걸 좋아하고 평소에 최소 일주일에 한번은 친구를 만나며 consequently i really love to meet my friends and peeple. so when i am free , i usually meet my friends at least once a week 하고자 하는 일도 활동적이고 사람을 만나는 서비스 직인 승무원을 준비하고 있습니다. so with these reason, currently i am planning to be cabin crew , and i am sure i will love this job 또 다른 취미로는 사진 찍기가 있는데 평소에 찍으러 다닐 때 친구나 가족을 데리러가려고 한답니다. and i love taking picture then i try to take my friends or my family with me to take photography as often as i can

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about me

안녕하세요 저는 ㅇㅇㅇ 입니다. 저는 2형제중 막내이며 가족들이 관심과 사랑을 잔뜩 받고 살아왔습니다.
Hello, my name is OOO, you can call me OO, I have an one older brother and my parents. in my family
therefore I am the youngest one in my family accordingly, and I have been loved.

그러다 보니 자연스레 제 성격은 밝아 지고 활동적인 사람이 돼었습니다.
so then it This has made me a really positive and active person. 

그러한 이유로 저는 사람만나는 걸 좋아하고 평소에 최소 일주일에 한번은 친구를 만나며
consequently I really love to meet my friends and peeple people. So when I am free , I usually meet my friends at least once a week.

하고자 하는 일도 활동적이고 사람을 만나는 서비스 직인 승무원을 준비하고 있습니다.
So with these reasons, currently I am currently planning to be work cabin crew, and I am sure I will love this job.

또 다른 취미로는 사진 찍기가 있는데 평소에 찍으러 다닐 때 친구나 가족을 데리러가려고 한답니다.
and  I love taking pictures then and I try to take my friends or my family with me to take photography as often as I can.


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Great job!!! :D I could understand you very well. Just a few notes: Remember "I" will always be capitalized, no matter where it is in the sentence. Remember to capitalize after a period(.). :)

Photography is really fun! What type of photography do you do? 

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