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Report: Learning about new technology
Our goal:
This year, on in early July, I went to Barcelona with my coworkers to attend a conference about a new version of Spring. The conference included a lot of talks for all day which lasted the entire day. Just in case, you don’t know Spring, I will explain what Spring is. In To be brief, it is one of the most known application frameworks, and it is used to develop backend applications. Maybe, if you don’t have any knowledge about computers science, you don’t know it. Going to to Getting to the point, our goal was to know (A better word to use would be "learn") new, interesting and exciting things that this framework was going to release in the next version. We wanted to be ahead from of other important companies. In my job, it is very important to be up-to-date, because new technology appears every day.
What we did:
We listened a lot of speaks speeches done by the most important people of Spring, such as, the Spring’s project leader. In spite of delays, there were a lot of interesting speaks speeches. and even there were other talks There were even discussions that were not related to Spring, but they were also amazing as well as interesting. After the talks, my coworkers and I shared our notes with each other to take conclusions about what we were seeing for all day to reach a conclusion about what we learned that day. (I'm honestly not too sure how to properly word this, because I'm not 100% sure on what exactly you were trying to say. Hopefully, I got this right. If not, I hope that another English speaker can better word this sentence. I apologize.) By summarizing, we learnt learned a lot! My boss wasn’t able to come, because he was very busy and had a lot of meetings here in Spain. (Another way to say this would be: "My boss wasn't able to come, because he was very busy with meetings here in Spain.") and Finally, he decided to trust us to bring up some notes from the conference.
Comments:
In conclusion, the conference was great, because we could try a lot of new things. and I would recommend it to anyone. On the other hand, I also consider it quite important to attend to these kind of conferences to improve your skills.
Notes:
This was really well done! I can tell that you have spent many hours studying English!
The phrase/word "a lot" is more of a slang term. It is used often, especially in Texas. It's commonly used in casual conversation. However, "a lot" is not commonly used for business documents, essays, or professional articles. "We listened to many speeches..." "By summarizing, we learned so much..." These are examples of different alternatives that could be used in place "a lot".
"Speech" is the proper word for when someone talks to a group about a specific topic.
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