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Hi. I've just started studying at university, and (1) I am going to learn French. Some of the students will belong start joining clubs, but i I (2) cannot choose what club i should belong to :(. There are many clubs. For example, the (3) tea ceremony club, English club, tennis, rugby ,dancing, cooking. If you are were me,what club would you want to join? Please tell me and correct my note.Orange corrections: Fundamental grammatical errors, pay attention to them!
Green corrections: Minor mistakes, but there are better ways to write these sentences :)
(1)
In English, if you use short sentences, it will seem very jerky and unnatural, for this reason, it's better to connect the first two sentences. In addition, if you vary the length of your sentences, you'll seem more natural!
英語にはね、短いセンテンスを使えば、ちょっと`不自然になるでしょう。その理由で、最初のセンテンスは繋がったほうがいいと思います!それに加えて、センテンスの長さを変化すれば、もっと自然になるよ!
(2)
Always capitalise "I" as in "me" in English!
英語には私の ”I” はキャピタルレターに変わらなければならないよ!
(3)
When you want to use many examples in a string of letters, add a comma after each example!
「Aとか、Bとか」を使いたい場合は、読点を使ってください!
初めて大学に入ったですね~。私も大学生ですが、あまり部活動を参加しないので、いいアドバイスはできない...でも、ゆっくり探せば、きっとタカナシさんは一番合っている部活部を探す得るでしょう!英語も悪くないし、英語部に入ってもいいと思うよ!0 votedApril 9, 20171A Story about Yoshiko
Plot so far.
Yoshiko made strawberry jam. It was her first time cooking.
But However, her grandparents didn't eat because they had never eaten strawberry jam and it looked like blood. After her some convincing, they finally ate it.
Both of them were amazed because it was fantastic.
Her grandfather said, "How smart you are, to be able to make such delicious jam."
Her grandmother then (そしての意味) said, "This is quite something. We have to offer it to our ancestor." she as put the plate with of jam in front of the picture of her ancestor.
Putting her hands together, she said softly. " This jam is Yoshiko's first dish that she made. Please try it."
Yoshiko became so happy elated/ecstatic because her mother and grandparents complemented complimented her from bottom of their hearts. They keenly sincerely (こころの中からの意味) felt that she has grew grown up and that she could now do the thing something that little kids couldn't do. Then, Yoshiko wanted to have her father taste it. As he is heardworking hardworking, he gets comes home late at night, after she goes to bed, and he leaves before she wakes up so they rarely see each other.
Yoshiko waited for him until 9 pm.
She usually goes to bed at 9pm that time, but she decided to wait for him until 10 pm. However, even it pasted past 10 pm, he didn't come back. Home.
Could you tell me that there are any better expressions? Thanks in advance!!Orange corrections: Fundamental errors. Pay attention to these!
Green corrections: Minor mistakes, as well as recommendations on how to make the sentences flow smoother :)
0 votedApril 9, 20171April 9th.
I went to the park to see cherry blossoms with my husband. Cherry blossoms were blooming from since last week here in Tokyo,
but last weekends it was too cold to go and seeing it. This Saturday and Sunday were both rainy and windy, but despite that, we wanted to see it today, so after the rain stopped, went to a park.
Although it was dark around there and some of blossoms were falling with rain and wind, we enjoyed seeing them.
I heard there were a lot of foreign tourists in famous parks like the imperial palace park.お花見ですね~羨ましいな~
Orange corrections: Fundamental Grammar errors. Pay attention to these!
Green corrections: Minor mistakes, but there are better ways to write these :)
0 votedApril 9, 20170欢迎加入iTalki!
My favorite actor
HuGe is one of the famous actors in China . He was born in Shanghai. He is thirty five years old. He has weighs 75kg and he is 185cm tall. HuGe is the most handsome person in my mind. He is a charming man and an unusual actor. When he got his He rose to fame because he starred in 'The Legend of Sword and Fairy', but he suffered a terrible accidents. This accident had a great effect on his life and work. His face was badly hurt. For an actor, appearence Appearance is very important. Therefore, he performed many operations to recover his appearence appearance. But Despite this, there was a big scar under his eye. However, he didin't didn't surrender to frustration (good expression! 加分!) and he paid more attention in into acting.
God helps those who help themselves, (再加分!) and he finally made a found great success in 2015. 2015 was his havest greatest year. Especially when he satrred in 'nirvana' in fire ,he received recognition on from the masses.(加分!)Just when everyone considered thought he was going to do more, but he announced that he would go to study in America.As a his fan, I will support his decision.I am looking forward to him become better. I love HuGe.Orange corrections - Fundamental errors. Pay attention to these!
Green corrections - Minor mistakes, but there are better ways to write these sentences :)
Interesting article!
Some points to remember:Unlike Chinese, English grammar needs a space after every punctuation! 要记得,用英文是要在每个标点符号后面加个空格的哦!
Very good use of expressions, keep it up! 英文成语用得好!很恰当!
Writing is about taking something you love and sharing your emotions and feelings with them, this is a very good example :) Keep writing! 写作就是一个把你自己对某个题目的感想和感受和大家分享,而这一个让大家知道你多喜欢HuGe!要继续写哦!
I enjoyed reading your article!
Keep Writing,Marcus
0 votedApril 9, 20170
