Long time no see:(

Hi. I've just started studying at university, and (1) I am going to learn French. Some of the  students will belong start joining clubs, but i I (2) cannot choose what club i should belong to :(. There are many clubs. For example, the (3) tea ceremony club, English club, tennis, rugby ,dancing, cooking. If you are were me,what club would you want to join? Please tell me and correct my note.

Orange corrections: Fundamental grammatical errors, pay attention to them! 

Green corrections: Minor mistakes, but there are better ways to write these sentences :) 

(1)

In English,  if you use short sentences, it will seem very jerky and unnatural, for this reason, it's better to connect the first two sentences. In addition, if you vary the length of your sentences, you'll seem more natural! 

英語にはね、短いセンテンスを使えば、ちょっと`不自然になるでしょう。その理由で、最初のセンテンスは繋がったほうがいいと思います！それに加えて、センテンスの長さを変化すれば、もっと自然になるよ！

(2)

Always capitalise "I" as in "me" in English! 

英語には私の　”I”　はキャピタルレターに変わらなければならないよ！

(3)

When you want to use many examples in a string of letters, add a comma after each example! 

「Aとか、Bとか」を使いたい場合は、読点を使ってください！

初めて大学に入ったですね～。私も大学生ですが、あまり部活動を参加しないので、いいアドバイスはできない...でも、ゆっくり探せば、きっとタカナシさんは一番合っている部活部を探す得るでしょう！英語も悪くないし、英語部に入ってもいいと思うよ！

Long time no see:(

Hi. I started studying at university. I am going to learn French too. Some students will join clubs. But i cannot choose what club i should belong to :(. There are many clubs. For example tea ceremony,English club., tennis rugby dance cooking. If you  were me,what club you want to join? Please tell and correct my note.

cooking seems to be interesting