For IELTS Writing Task :) Please correct my English for natural & adapted IELTS exam expression, thanks! --- Task 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter -say why he/she would not enjoy going to college -explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her -suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her Begin your letter as follows: Dear_____, Here is my answer below. Dear Saki, Hi, thank you for giving me a letter. I am going to advice about what you think. I think you should get a job instead of going to college. The reason why you said you don't know what major you should choose. Once you enter college, basically you have to learn something for two years or more. And if you are not interested in that subject, you would not enjoy going to college. It is a very good idea for you to get a job. Because you can get money and also learn about business. You are an adaptive person, plus you have a pretty smile. In my opinion, working as a hotel receptionist would be suitable for you. You know a lot of hotels which you went to travel overseas so you can use your experiences. I'm always your side. Do your best.

For my diary_ピザ食べて後悔してる :) Please correct my English for natural & casual expression, thanks! --- Recently, I often eat a pizza which is leftover on a Italian store next to my workplace after working. I have to lose weight actually but I really love a pizza so can't handle my appetite. After eating I regret it. Wanna stop eating a pizza anymore...