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For my diary_ピザ食べて後悔してる :) Please correct my English for natural & casual expression, thanks! --- Recently, I often eat a pizza which is leftover on a Italian store next to my workplace after working. I have to lose weight actually but I really love a pizza so can't handle my appetite. After eating I regret it. Wanna stop eating a pizza anymore...

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Recently, I often eat a leftover pizza from an Italian store next to my workplace after I finish working. I actually have to lose weight, but I really love pizza so I can't control myself. After eating, I regret it. 

The last part is confusing. It's either: I think it's:

I want to stop eating pizzas...


I hope this helps!

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For my diary_ピザ食べて後悔してる

:) Please correct my English for natural & casual expression, thanks!
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Recently, I often eat  pizza which is leftover＜残ろのやつ？i prefer "made"(笑)＞ by a Italian store next to my workplace after working.
I have to lose weight actually but I  love eating pizza so much that i can't handle my appetite.
After eating I regret it.

Wanna stop eating  pizza anymore...
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For my diary_ピザ食べて後悔してる

:) Please correct my English for natural & casual expression, thanks!
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Recently, I often eat a pizza which is leftover on a Italian store next to my workplace after working.
I have to lose weight actually but I really love a pizza so can't handle my appetite.
After eating I regret it.

Wanna stop eating a pizza anymore...

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Hello. How about mentioning your love for pizza and your desire to lose weight first before saying what you have been doing lately? Assuming that you are NOT eating "leftovers"(残り物) but discounted ones, below is my suggestion:

I love pizza and I could not resist eating it even if I know I have to lose weight.
Recently, I often eat priced-down pizza sold at an Italian pizza shop next to my workplace after work and I always regret having done so afterwards. 
How I want to stop eating pizza from now on! ( or, I must have more self-control to break this new habit!)

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