Well done on getting full marks :) Genius.

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Today so happy

:)

Remember to add spaces at the beginning of sentences and you're golden 

Hi Alina :) Sure, let's help you out.

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Hello, there's a little fragment from my essay, could you please check it? Thank you!

My judgment is based mostly on personal experience. Looking back on my university days, I realize that my professors often neglected the initial lectures’ purposes, replacing the lesson with vague talks on a subject.

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Well done!

My hometown history

My hometown is Okinawa prefecture, Japan. Okinawa is an island that lies in the southwest of Japan. Originally, the island was one country. It was called "Ryukyu Kingdom".Castles in Okinawa are registered as a world heritage site.
Ryukyu Kingdom is dependent on trade with China, southeast Asia and Japan.
In 1879, Ryukyu Kingdom was occupied by Japan. Then the island became called Okinawa prefecture.Therefore many things, such as language and formality were Japanized.
From 1945 to 1972, Okinawa was occupied by America because of its loss in the World WarⅡ.This time, many things such as money and food were Americanized.
In 1972, the island was ruled by Japan again.
But Okinawa is still inhabited by a large American many Americans.
So Okinawa consists of a lot of culture. If you visit Okinawa, you can feel that.

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Very interesting, I've learnt a lot reading this. Some corrections:

- Have spaces 

- I made some grammar corrections

- I've changed a few phrases to make them sound more natural

reasons for application. answers for a job interview.

(The most interesting thing for me to work in service field was that I can be a help for people) What interests me most about working in this field is that I can help people. Especially I felt so glad when I saw my I especially feel glad when seeing customers satisfied and pleasant with my service and it gives me a sense of accomplishment. These great feelings enlighten me that I am proper person for service field the right person for the job and encourage me to do the best job possible for more customers. With a great deal of passion, I’d like to be part of a hospitable cabin crew that goes beyond passengers’ expectations (or goes the extra mile?).

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China Eastern Airline has been my dream company since I longed to become part of a cabin crew. Its flight attendants whom I came across at the airport seemed professional and kind on the surface and they looked exactly the same way as I imagined myself on a cabin crew. Moreover, I believe my nature of dedication and hospitality to others is well matched with its service motto (or ethos?); the airline puts top priority on passengers’ satisfaction. With a great love and passion toward China Eastern Airline, I hope that I can become a guardian angel that ensures passengers’ safety and comfort in the sky. Thank you.

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I hope you understand my corrections. Let me know if you have any questions.

Meaning of life

If we are supported firmly by some people, like parents or friends who know deeply about us, this feeling might not be as strong, because we can see obviously that hope is there and all that suffer is meaningful — even if we die of something, some people will remember us.

So in this way, we may say that the meaning of life is to exchange social support. When we have some backup, we can sleep in peace at night without the fear of predators; when we serve as a backup to others, we enjoy the tranquility of the soul and believe that everything is worthwhile.

So as Maslow said, one seeks support from the outer world at the beginning for provision, hugging, and other forms of security, and when feeling safe enough, one might start to think about self-esteem, which means to give more than to get, mostly in one's talented way. As a result, one establishes some win – win cooperation with the world.
But life would seldom be smooth like a piece of paper (smooth like a piece of cloth? smooth like a ribbon?). People may feel insecure sometimes when they are pursuing self-esteem. So as someone once said, "Begin with confusion, and end with an advanced layer of confusion.”

What’s the ultimate meaning of life?
Maybe there will never be a consensus answer. But as Descartes once said, “cogito ergo sum”, so a feeling of confusion (or ambiguity or uncertainty) might also be a good thing, because that could make us feel real.
A sense of existence, maybe that is one simple version of the meaning of life.

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I enjoyed reading this, very philosophical and nice reference to Maslow :)

Subtitles on movies

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Well done! I changed some of your phrases to make it sound more natural.

And "English movies" refers to any movie where the original actors spoke in English :) British movies are those made by British film directors, usually, but not always, filmed in England.

Is the grammar in this paragraph correct? please fix it for me.

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Your grammar was almost spot-on.

I just capitalised 'This morning' and '2nd Quarter'.

Also, successfully and spectacularly are adverbs.

'We would very much like to congratulate... and [to] thank you'