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Chapter1 The Boy Who Lived ~part 2 Chapter1 The Boy Who Lived ~part 2 He decided to talk about it to his wife, although he knew his wife might be very offended by this. He told his wife all the wired things that happen today, then just like he expected, his wife was not happy to talk about that and she went back to sleep. Outside the Dursley’s house, there was a cat which had been watching the Dursleys all day. Then an old man who was wearing a cloak appeared, his name was Dumbledore. He passed by the cat, then the cat suddenly became a woman, her name was McGonagall. Dumbledore told McGonagall that Mr. and Mrs. Potter were died. He was here to leave their son, Harry, with the Durselys. McGonagall didn’t agree with that, because she thought that Durselys wasn’t a suitable family to raise Harry. She thought that they are were miserable, and Harry could be very famous. Dumbledore then told her this was this boy’s only place to stay. He needed to stay here until he got older enough to prepare to accept his reputation, before he could come back to our world. When they were talking, a giant riding a motorbike appeared in the sky and landing in front of them. He carried a big basket, in there was a little boy sleeping, they put him in front of the Dursley’s house and left a letter with him.

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Well done xD
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Thanks for sharing some childhood memories, there were some mistakes (minor) I'll correct them later.

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