To be confident
The cartoon shows a football field, on which a player is preparing to shoot, but he thinks the goalkeeper is so giant that he may not kick a goal. However, the goalkeeper thinks he is too small to catch the ball. Both of them are afraid of facing difficulties.
Nowadays, most people have a powerful image of their opponents in their mind, but they consider themselves as a small figure. They don’t have enough confidence to defeat their opponents. In the real life, many people are struggling for their life in this competitive society. And they have to bear on many pressures. However, most of them don’t have a certain goal and don’t know what they really want. Thus , when they meet with some challenges or difficulties, they are easy to give up. Additionally, they care too much about whether they will win or not and their courage just being weaken.
Although there are many difficulties in our life, we should believe ourselves and be confident to challenge any difficulties. Everyone has infinite potential to be successful.
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To be confident
The cartoon shows a football field, on which a player is preparing to shoot, but he thinks the goalkeeper is so giant that he may not kick a goal. However, the goalkeeper thinks he is too small to catch the ball. Both of them are afraid of facing difficulties.
Nowadays, most people have a powerful image of their opponents in their mind, but they consider themselves as a small figure. They don’t have enough confidence to defeat their opponents. In the real life, many people are struggling for their life in this competitive society. And they have to bear on many pressures. However, most of them don’t have a certain goal and don’t know what they really want. Thus , when they meet with some challenges or difficulties, they are easy to give up. Additionally, they care too much about whether they will win or not and their courage just being weaken.
Although there are many difficulties in our life (in life OR in our lives), we should believe in ourselves and be confident to challenge any difficulties. Everyone has infinite potential to be successful.
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This was really well-written! I am giving positive feedback:
- Great use of varied vocabulary like 'competitive' and 'pressures'
- Great use of conjunctions like 'however', 'additionally', 'although', 'thus'.
- Your article's main message was very clear, the article well-structured with a good conclusion.
Some notes:
- Paragraphing
- We believe in ourselves
- 'In life' or 'in our lives'
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