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Hello, there's a little fragment from my essay, could you please check it? Thank you! Some students prefer classes with open discussions between the professor and students and almost no lectures. Other students prefer classes with lectures and almost no discussions. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. (the question is taken from toeflresources.com) Lectures make up a significant part of university classes and are normally aim to give students a factual information and maybe teach them some practical skills. But in fact the structure and the content of classes are usually up to professors. Some of them prefer open discussions during classes to ordinary lectures. In my opinion it’s not the best way to teach. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay. My judgment is based mostly on personal experience. Looking back on my university days I realize that my professors often neglected the initial lectures’ purposes replacing a teaching with vague talks on a subject.

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Hello, there's a little fragment from my essay, could you please check it? Thank you!

Some students prefer classes with open discussions between the professor and students and almost no lectures. Other students prefer classes with lectures and almost no discussions. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. (the question is taken from toeflresources.com)

Lectures make up a significant part of university classes and are normally aim to give students a factual information and maybe teach them some practical skills. However, the structure and the content of classes are usually up to professors. Some of them prefer open discussions during classes to ordinary lectures. In my opinion, it’s not the best way to teach. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
My judgment is based mostly on personal experience. Looking back on my university days, I realize that my professors often neglected the initial lectures’ purposes, thereby replacing a lesson with vague talks on a subject.
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Hello, there's a little fragment from my essay, could you please check it? Thank you!

Some students prefer classes with open discussions between the professor and students and almost no lectures. Other students prefer classes with lectures and almost no discussions. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. (the question is taken from toeflresources.com)

Lectures make up a significant part of university classes and are normally aim to give (aimed at giving? designed to give?) students a factual information and maybe teach them some practical skills. But in fact the structure and the content of classes are usually up to professors. Some of them prefer open discussions during classes to ordinary lectures. In my opinion, it’s not the best way to teach. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.


My judgment is based mostly on personal experience. Looking back on my university days, I realize that my professors often neglected the initial lectures’ purposes, replacing the lesson with vague talks on a subject.

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