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Today so happy Today I got my A-level results and I scored a full mark of my mathematics.The rest are also satisfactory. Now,I am practicing my Physics and English.Even though I know the principle of each Physical phenomenon,it's hard for me to describe them correctly in English. My dream is entering a colledge I love.I think as long as I don't stop my step of struggle,it will be increasely close to my dream.

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Well done on getting full marks :) Genius.

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Today so happy

Today I got my A-level results and I scored a full marks in mathematics.The rest are also satisfactory.
Now, I am studying Physics and English. Even though I know the principle of each physical phenomenon, it's hard for me to describe them correctly in English.
My dream is entering a college I love. I think that as long as I don't stop my step of struggle (pass each hurdle? overcome every obstacle? keep improving?), it will be (I will be getting) increasely close to my dream.

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Today *I am* so happy

Today I got my A-level results and I scored  full marks of in my mathematics.The rest were also satisfactory.
Now,I am practicing my Physics and English.Even though I know the principle of each Physical phenomenon,it's hard for me to describe them correctly in English.
My dream is entering a colledge  I love.I think as long as I don't stop my step of struggle,it will be increasely close to my dream.   trying I will realize my dream.

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