Is the grammar in this paragraph correct? please fix it for me.
this morning, the closing ceremony of the 2nd quarter 2016 of Tuan 123 Ltd was held successful and spectacular in Muong Thanh Luxury Vientiane.
We would like very much to congratulate
Tuan 123 Ltd for your achievements and thank for choosing us to hold this special event.
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Is the grammar in this paragraph correct? please fix it for me.
This morning, the closing ceremony of the 2nd Quarter 2016 of Tuan 123 Ltd was held successfully and spectacularly in Muong Thanh Luxury Vientiane.We would like very much to congratulate Tuan 123 Ltd for your achievements and thank you for choosing us to hold this special event.
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Your grammar was almost spot-on.
I just capitalised 'This morning' and '2nd Quarter'.
Also, successfully and spectacularly are adverbs.
'We would very much like to congratulate... and [to] thank you'
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