Need Correction and score for Ilets Writing task 2 WRITING TASK 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Many people believe that media coverage of celebrities is having a negative effect on children. To what extent do you agree? You should write at least 250 words. My answer : Media is a double edged sword as a lot of people might think it has a bad influence on the kids especially for covering celebrities’ news. I would totally agree with this perspective and we will support this idea leading by examples in this essay. Firstly, our kids are always looking for a role model in their lives. At this early age they observe then trying to copy what they noticed, so imagine if they found their beloved ones doing something dangerous, they might get excited quite sometimes. for example me and my brothers were very excited to watch WWE while we were a children so I remember one day my old brother tried to copy one of the wrestler move to the extend he broke my hand . I spent my summer vacation recovering from this injury. That was a sad story and there are millions of stories like this happening each and every day because of the media. Unfortunately part of the media concentrate only on the negative news just to lead some traffic to their channels therefore to get more sponsors. They are trying to generate a propaganda which wouldn’t be a good impact on the kids. Parents should be part of the solution and they should control what their kids can watch and what not. They should set some restriction roles as it’s extremely unacceptable to leave keep your children choose what to watch. after the above mentioned example my father was prohibited any kind of violent shows or movies .

Need Correction and score for Ilets Writing task 2 WRITING TASK 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: A healthy person is often described as someone who has a good diet, gets plenty of exerciseand avoids stress. What should people do to stay healthy in your country? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words. My answer : A healthy person is the one who use to take good care of his diet and training on a daily basis. There are lots of reasons to stay healthy on my country, this is what we are going to discuss in this essay. Firstly It’s really hard to stick to your diet plan as it requires determination and passion. Most of the people who tried a diet plan , quit after a few weeks . Due to hectic busy life we are all suffering to eat junk food. We don’t have the patient or the time to prepare our own meals. It’s sad story, isn’t it? Recent studies have proven that a person he eats healthy lives more than others. At the same time they feel more active and mentally focused. Media should be part of the solution and raise the awareness about the importance of eating healthy. Government needs to participate as well by generating a campaigns for a health check up . Everyone should has a training plan at least 30 minutes a day. Unfortunately some people can’t effort to go to the GYM or have a personal trainer however a lot of YouTube videos indicate people who were able to be in a good physical shape only by training at home therefore no excuse . One of my brothers has this passion to become a fitness model so not only he stopped ordering any kind of food but learned to cook his own dish. I conclusion we all need to exercise and eat healthy to have a better and happy life.

Need Correction and score for Ilets Writing task 2 WRITING TASK 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no special knowledge of the following topic. Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines. Should parents be made by law to immunise their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunise their children? You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence. You should write at least 250 words. My answer : A lot of diseases all across the world have been prevented by vaccines. Some people think that parents should be treated by the law if they didn’t support this idea however other might say it’s their rights to choose whether to protect their children or not . In this essay will discuss both views with real examples. Recent studies have talked about the importance of vaccines, they approved taking this medicine protect 93% of the children from being ill and unhealthy. Also the doctors said we should take it seriously since a lot of people was diagnosed by some diseases because they refused to listen to doctors advises. Now, since the issue is very critical some people suggested having a tailored law against the parents who ignore this matter. Government should analyze the reasons behind their ignorance, especially if this might lead for their child’s death or even spreading diseases between a group of kids. Unfortunately other people identify it as it’s their rights to choose and no one can tell them how to parent their child. It’s their responsibilities to take this decision and no one else has the power to decide for them. They might be unaware about the consequences of this doing and what will be the impact on their kids. In conclusion we need to raise the awareness in the media about the influence of not taking the vaccines and the importance of these medicines. Campaigns should be held at the schools and the universities all over the world.

Need Correction and score for Ilets Writing task 2 WRITING TASK 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. More and more qualified people are moving from poor to rich countries to fill vacancies in specialist areas like engineering, computing and medicine. Some people believe that by encouraging the movement of such people, rich countries are stealing from poor countries. Others feel that this is only part of the natural movement of workers around the world. Do you agree or disagree? You should write at least 250 words. My answer : There are a lot of people who always looking to move from their own country to a different one for specialized jobs such as engineers and doctors. While some people think it is stealing, others might have another perspective. In this essay we will discuss both views. Most of qualified candidates are looking to immigrate to countries like USA or Canada to have a better life where government supports them and cooperate to have a luxury of living. One of the main concerns for those immigrants is they want their kids to have a better education than they used to have on their own counties. Not only they looking for a better life but they also want to feel secured and part of the society which is something that you might miss on your country. Most importantly they also look for a strong passport that allows them to travel around the world freely. On the other hand a few people identify this as stealing from the poor countries especially if those specialists stayed, they would have participated on the economic development therefore having a good career at their home towns. As matter of fact they think that it is not even fair to get the best talented people out of third world countries to contribute on another country’s progress and success I believe if those people had the opportunities on their countries, they would never think about leaving their families, friends and memories so they can be stranger on another country.

Need Correction and rate me for Ilets Writing task 1 WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope. Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter: explain why you are writing express concern about the missing card ask them what they intend to do You do NOT need to write your own address. Begin your letter as: Dear Sir or Madam, My Answer : Dear Sir or Madam, I’m writing in regards a reply to your last letter which I just received recently. I would like to express my frustration since my new bank card wasn’t delivered. Yesterday I got a call from one of your courier about my package then we agreed about the delivery time by 8:00 PM. I was very busy therefore i got back home by 8:45 PM however he left the envelope with the security which is extremely unacceptable. While I was trying to open the package I notice it’s not fully sealed then after I opened it I realized it is empty. I have no idea whether the card has been taken by your employee or the guard and I don’t know what should I do ! I’m completely speechless about this behavior beside I needed this card as quick as possible so I can pay my tuition fees. Now I demand a full explanation about what happened and at the same time I’m waiting to know what can be done about this. Best Regards Ahmed

Need Correction and score for Ilets Writing task 2 WRITING TASK 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Modern communications mean that it’s no longer necessary to write letters. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words. My answer : Recently people invented a new ways of communications that helped us to use them instead of writing a letter. This essay will discuss whether we agree or not . fifty years ago people were struggling to send a message to someone else . First the person has to write a letter and wait until the other party receive it or just go personally to deliver the message face to face . Nowadays only what you need to do is type the message and it will be delivered instantly furthermore face time or Skype saved a lot of time due to that you got the option to speak with someone live without having to go all the way to meet him . I live far away from my family and what I really love about new ways of communications is the effectiveness since you always have the ability to check on your family talk to them whether face to face , verbally or even texting so I totally support this idea and I believe that most of my generation would feel the same . World became a small town to the extent that you can call anyone in the world no matter where he is , immediately . Currently there are a lot of virtual companies who depend on the new ways of communications and if we don’t have those methods those startups would never even exist. Imagine what would be their connection ways and how long does it take ? Finally I think those ways assisted the whole society to better communicate.

Need Correction and score for Ilets Writing task 2 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating / cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: give details of what went wrong explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time say what action you would like the manager to take My answer: Dear Mr. John I’m writing in regards my stay at your hotel a few weeks ago . I was on a business trip for a couple of days and I booked a single room at your hotel because it was nearby my conference . to be honest I didn’t really had the chance to check any online rating before booking however let explain the situation to you . While the room service was not bad however the facilities was horrible . Especially air condition as you know summer in Dubai is extremely hot and people can’t survive without A/C but in my room cooling system wasn’t working , the only thing that woks is the fan . I reported the issue but it wasn’t fixed therefore I had to buy ice bags to put it in front of the fan so I can feel the cold air . I’m trying to flag this issue so it should never happen to another guest and I think I should be compensated for such a hassle . Best Regards Ahmed