Need Correction and score for Ilets Writing task 2 WRITING TASK 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Many people believe that media coverage of celebrities is having a negative effect on children. To what extent do you agree? You should write at least 250 words. My answer : Media is a double edged sword as a lot of people might think it has a bad influence on the kids especially for covering celebrities’ news. I would totally agree with this perspective and we will support this idea leading by examples in this essay. Firstly, our kids are always looking for a role model in their lives. At this early age they observe then trying to copy what they noticed, so imagine if they found their beloved ones doing something dangerous, they might get excited quite sometimes. for example me and my brothers were very excited to watch WWE while we were a children so I remember one day my old brother tried to copy one of the wrestler move to the extend he broke my hand . I spent my summer vacation recovering from this injury. That was a sad story and there are millions of stories like this happening each and every day because of the media. Unfortunately part of the media concentrate only on the negative news just to lead some traffic to their channels therefore to get more sponsors. They are trying to generate a propaganda which wouldn’t be a good impact on the kids. Parents should be part of the solution and they should control what their kids can watch and what not. They should set some restriction roles as it’s extremely unacceptable to leave keep your children choose what to watch. after the above mentioned example my father was prohibited any kind of violent shows or movies .