My answer :

Some people are vegetarian so they don’t eat any kind of meat or fish. They think probably this is better for themselves to be more healthy and at the same time it is better for our society. In this essay we are going to discuss this prospective perspective with relevant examples.

Vegetarians feel very guilty for killing an animal out of a personal desire to eat that poor creature and they think it is against the nature. Sometimes they identify that such a human behavior might lead to extinction for some animals however we should all live on in one community in peace . One of my brothers had the same thought 3 years ago as he said they were created for other reasons but than to be eaten . He even started to be aggravated since we couldn’t agree with him . Each time we are gathering to have a dinner he sets sits aside from us and eats alone . Another example will would be famous WWE wrestler “Daniel Brayn” as he said he feels so much healthier when he quit meat and fish and he became a better performer and more active . Besides this we have a lot of organizations that support the same idea.

I believe since eating meat or fish are not religiously prohibited so why not? Especially it tastes so good most of the time . God created a very good balance between all the creatures and if you watch one of those documentary movies then you would see how the lion trying to survive by eating as for example the zebra then how is zebra surviving by eating the green and so on . It is a life cycle and we have to admit it.

At the end I guess everyone can eat whatever he wants since it is not illegal.

Sincerely Ahmed

I've tried to correct this essay without changing too much, but I've also rewritten it to sound more natural below. A couple of notes on style :

- Paragraphs are important in English. Start a new paragraph when you add a new idea. This makes it easier to read.

- The essay has a good structure - introduction, points in favour, points against, and conclusion. However, the introduction is almost the same as the question, and you don't need to sign your name at the end.

My answer:

Vegetarians are people who choose not to eat any kind of meat or fish. They give reasons ranging from for personal health to the good of society as a whole. In this essay we will be discussing this topic.

Vegetarians may feel guilt over killing an animal for human consumption, or say that it goes against the natural order of things. They may also raise concerns over causing extinctions, or say that animals and people should live in peace with one another. Three years ago, one of my brothers had similar thoughts. He said that animals were created for reasons other than to be eaten. When we couldn't agree with him, he even became quite aggravated. Now, when we gather for a meal, he sits separately and eats by himself. Another, more famous, person who shares these views would be WWE wrestler Daniel Brayn, who said "Having given up meat and fish, I feel much healthier. I'm more active and I perform better too."* There are also a lot of organisations that support the same ideas.

Personally, I have no problem with eating meat or fish, since it's not against my religion. I also think that meat and fish taste delicious! I believe that God created a very good balance between all creatures. If you watch nature documentaries you will see that, for example, lions survive by eating zebras, which in turn survive by eating grasses and leaves. It is a cycle of life, and I strongly believe this is the way things should be.

In conclusion, however, I would say that as long as it's legal, everyone is free to make their own dietary choices.

*This is a quote I made up. If you want to include one in your essay, be sure to look it up properly.