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Need Correction and rate me for Ilets Writing task 1 WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope. Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter: explain why you are writing express concern about the missing card ask them what they intend to do You do NOT need to write your own address. Begin your letter as: Dear Sir or Madam, My Answer : Dear Sir or Madam, I’m writing in regards a reply to your last letter which I just received recently. I would like to express my frustration since my new bank card wasn’t delivered. Yesterday I got a call from one of your courier about my package then we agreed about the delivery time by 8:00 PM. I was very busy therefore i got back home by 8:45 PM however he left the envelope with the security which is extremely unacceptable. While I was trying to open the package I notice it’s not fully sealed then after I opened it I realized it is empty. I have no idea whether the card has been taken by your employee or the guard and I don’t know what should I do ! I’m completely speechless about this behavior beside I needed this card as quick as possible so I can pay my tuition fees. Now I demand a full explanation about what happened and at the same time I’m waiting to know what can be done about this. Best Regards Ahmed

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m writing in regards a reply to your last letter, which I just received recently. I would like to express my frustration since my new bank card wasn’t delivered.

Yesterday, I got a call from one of your couriers about my package then and, we agreed about the delivery time: by 8:00 PM. I was very busy, therefore i I got back home by 8:45 PM. However, he left the envelope with the security, which is extremely unacceptable. While I was trying to open the package, I noticed it’s it was not fully sealed. Then, after I opened it, I realized it is was empty. I have no idea whether the card has been taken by your employee or the guard, and I don’t know what should I do. !

I’m completely speechless about this behavior. Besides, I needed this card as quickly as possible so I can pay my tuition fees.

Now, I demand a full explanation about what happened, and, at the same time, I’m waiting to know what can be done about this.

Best Regards,
Ahmed

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