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Need Correction and score for Ilets Writing task 2 WRITING TASK 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words. My answer : A lot of issues will be raised by the next ten years especially the ones that more relevant to the population which is increasing rapidly besides environmental problems caused by traffic jam. In this essay we will be discussing those issues and how to overcome them. Not only traffic jam is one of the main issues nowadays, yet we’re going to suffer more in the future. Government doesn’t move a muscle towards these sorts of issues. It’s very frustrating when you spend two hours in a road that could only take approximately 30 minutes. Furthermore it’s completely dangerous for the environment as well. Recent studies have proven that 80% of the car accidents caused by the traffic jam. Let’s face it; traffic jam is so relevant to the population. Most of the people prefer to live in specific urban whereas there are a lot of facilities and opportunities. On the other hand government should encourage people to move to the suburb but at the same time they should also provide them with the same luxury of living they used to have. For example in my city Cairo Egypt , I have always preferred to take the metro instead of struggling in the jam however the government started to build a new towns such as “ New Cairo” where you have a better environment and almost no traffic . Imagine if you can go to work every day back and forth smoothly, how would that make you feel? In conclusion, we need to start implementing the solutions as quickly as possible instead of just waiting until the damage is already done to the extent that can’t be fixed.

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