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Introduction
你好,老师和同学们。
Ni hao, laoshi he tongxuemen。
我的英文叫 Aaron ,和我的中文叫罗安杰。
Wo de Yingwen jiao Aaron,he wo de zhongwen jiao Luo an Jie
我的生日四月二十一号一九九一年,所以我是二十一今年。
Wo de shengri siyue ershiyihao yijiujiuyinian suoyi wo shi ershiyi jinnian
我是澳大利亚人。我是从悉尼。
Wo shi aodaliya ren。 Wo shi cong Xini。
我的家是没有太大不能太小。
Wǒ de jiā shì méiyǒu tài dà bùnéng tài xiǎo.
我家有六口人。 我爸爸,妈妈,两妹妹,弟弟,和我。
Wo jia you liu kou ren。Wo baba mama liang meimei didi he wo。
我爸爸是景观老师, 我妈妈是小学二年级老师。
Wo baba shi jingguan laoshi,wo mama shi xiaoxue ernianji laoshi。
我周末喜欢和多啤酒和看足球,我也喜欢去跳舞。
Wo zhoumo xihuan he duo pijiu he kan shi zuqiu。Wo ye xihuan qu kan tiaowu。
我没有个女朋友。要是我有,我请她吃法国菜因为所有的女孩喜欢法国菜。
Wo meiyou ge nupengyou. Yaoshi wo you, wo qing ta chi faguo cai, yinwie Suǒyǒu de nǚhái xihuan faguo cai.
我喜欢学中文。
Wo xihuan xue zhongwen。
中文是很有意思,可是也很难
Zhongwen shi hen youyisi, keshi ye hen nan。
我会写字写很好,可是我的语法太不好了。
Wo hui xie zi xie hen hao keshi wo de yufa taibuhaole。
我还写太慢了,所以我得多练习。
Wo hai xie tai mang le suoyi wo dei duo lianxi。
我常常很晚才睡觉,因为我得多练习。
Wo changchang hen wan cai shuijiao, yinwei wo dei duo lianxi。
谢谢,给我听。
Xiexie, gei wo ting。句中使用了连接词必须使用逗号隔开。例如:可是(表转折);所以(表因果);也(表并列)。
这三个词都是作为一句话的开头,要用逗号结束这句话之前的那一句。
仅帮你改正这一个问题。语句还有些不通顺的地方,以后慢慢练习,希望多看到你的文章。
0 votedMay 29, 20120- Weekend is coming. Is it nice when you working on friday? Because you know the weekend is coming soon. ;) I was plan to go to the beach with one of my schoolfellow this weekend, but since he has schedule to pick up his uncle in the airport on sunday, unfortunally i work on saturday's am, so we will not going to the beach this weekend. But it's alright, The sun seems will be hot these days, I'd rather not to burn myself by the sunshine. Hope next time it gets cool, and we can go to the beach again. End of all, I have a picture of what i saw when i on my way to work. See those beautiful clounds in the blue sky, does it makes you feeling fresh? Have a nice weekend!
May 25, 201210 - I AM SHERLOCKED Recently I have been watching the SHERLOCK. Which had been published Senson 1 in 2010 and Season 2 in 2012. The show's background changed in the 21 st century from 19 th century. The Detective Sherlock Holmes and his Private Assistant John Watson has experienced a series of dangerous, unusual adventure. It's very impressed by the incredible reasoning ability that Sherlock has. With the extension of the plot, I found Sherlock wasn't like I thought about him ever. Actually he cares those people whom around him very much, even sometimes he still said words hurts. But i think he just don't know how to express in the right way except to told the truth. One of his words said to John, "I don't have freinds, I only got one." This was really touched me. I am very glad to see them works together with trusted by each other, and I hope soon we can see the season 3 in the nearest future.May 24, 201221
First notebook entry: Introducing myself
大家好。我叫夏嘉瑞。我是加拿大人。几年以前,我在中国教英文。现在我在大学学习语言学和英文。几年以后我打算回去中国教英文在一所中国的大学。
很高兴认识您们。你好,夏嘉瑞。你可以试试这样说:
大家好,我叫夏嘉瑞。我是加拿大人。几年以前,我在中国教英文。现在我在大学学习语言学和英文。几年以后我打算回去中国,在一所中国的大学教英文。
很高兴认识你们。
你写的非常好了,我能完全看懂你的意思。
注释:您:对你的尊称,单数,不可与"们"搭配。
原文:几年以后我打算回去中国教英文在一所中国的大学。
前半句正确,后半句语序应该倒过来。
改正:几年以后我打算回去中国,在一所中国的大学教英文。
期待你更多的文章,多多练习,你的中文会提高的很快的。
0 votedMay 22, 20120回家的路。。。
我喜欢在城外玩。昨天我做很多事。 复习语法,所以会写这。
我吃了晚饭,去火车站。火车还没开始呢, 所以我能到喝一杯咖啡。
喝咖啡的时候我看了介绍中国的书。火车就要离开!我快去。火车上不太多人。
到了莫斯科,我跟朋友在火车站旁边见面。 火车站离家不太远。
回了家,就吃晚饭, 然后睡觉。
现在我写得怎么样?Hi wse-suki, 试试这样说:
我喜欢在城外玩。昨天我做了很多事,复习了语法,所以会写这些。
我吃了晚饭,去火车站。火车还没开始呢,所以我能先去喝一杯咖啡。
喝咖啡的时候我看了介绍中国的书。火车就要离开!我赶快上去。火车上人不太多。
到了莫斯科,我跟朋友在火车站旁边见面。火车站离家不太远。
回到家,就吃晚饭,然后睡觉。
你写的很好了,我能完全看懂你的意思。这样和人聊天是完全可以的,只是在写文章的时候需要更注意语法。
希望能看到你的新文章,多多交流吧,你的中文会提高的很快的。
0 votedMay 22, 20120- Do i stand a chance to make my work come up great Hello everyone!it's been 10 days after I registered in ITALKI.when i log in it again today, I found there's some people who looking for my update study working. I am sorry for what i am missed, and i think i will keep update my write work more frequently. Here I have something want to sharing with you of what I've done in those 10 days, i spent a week worked daily and prepared for my customers which from Australia came to visit the factory. My engineer has some advice of the design they provided. So he make some improvement which is really better to processing based on the original design. But I am still worring about it, because my manager has an other important project to deal with, so there will be only me and my engineer(he doesn't speak English) to receiving the customers.and I feel nervous about it, Because this is my first time having a foreigner visitor, I am afraid if I can't translate to the customers what's the idea of my engineer's new design well. Finally, My customers arrived on Monday. We had discussed about one hour, We introduced them the new design, and they asked to send them email of the new design. After we looked through the factory's operation. They seem pleased with it, and soon they told me they are very busy for this business travel, so they just took some photos of the factory and few products and said goodbye. After they are gone, I sent an email of a PPT with comments of the new design. It's shorter than i thought how long this visit would be. i don't know what can I do now but waiting. I am very confused with which tense should i use in my write, I'd appreciated if anybody can help me with it! Thanks. :)May 22, 201250
- Introduce myself Hello Everyone,I choosed a wonderful name Charlotte as mine.because it sounds like my chinese name. i am looking forward to improve my English here,because i may use it when i am traveling all around the world.and also i do export trade,so i am dieing for do something with my poor English,and hope you guys get what you want too.
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