I AM SHERLOCKED

Recently I have been watching (the detective show) Sherlock. The first season was released/published in 2010, and the second season in 2012. (rewritten)

The show's background changed from the 19th century to (in) the 21st century (partly rewritten). The Detective Sherlock Holmes and his Private Assistant John Watson has experienced a series of dangerous, unusual adventure. I'm very impressed by the incredible reasoning ability that Sherlock has.

With the extension of the plot, I found that Sherlock wasn't like/how I thought he was.  He actually cares about those people whom are around him very much, even though he still says hurtful words sometimes (partly rewritten). But I think he just doesn't (it is ''he doesn't) know how to express in the right way except than to tell the truth. 

He said these words to John (rewritten): "I don't have friends, I only got one." This was really touching to me. I am very glad to see them work (works) together with trusted in (by) each other, and I hope that we can soon see season 3/the 3rd season in the (near est ) future.

Good job Shao Lu!! You are impressed by Sherlock Holmes, and I'm impressed by you ;) You have already made improvements.

Correct this entry?  OK!  Your English is very good.  You studied and you've already learned a lot.  You're having trouble with the verbs, the tenses are times, like a crime scene, who done its and when; the perfect verb is a connection to the past but not when which recently is and don't forget that low man on the totem pole, the third person singular and they all must agree with each other.  

You are also mixing the pronouns and parts of speech.  Pay attention to the parts of speech because the are the structure of sentences and are what makes the story you're telling fluent and not choppy.  You are doing a good job.  I have materials I can give you and I wonder how your speaking and listening are these days.  

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