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Introduce myself
Hello Everyone,I choosed a wonderful name Charlotte as mine.because it sounds like my chinese name. i am looking forward to improve my English here,because i may use it when i am traveling all around the world.and also i do export trade,so i am dieing for do something with my poor English,and hope you guys get what you want too.
Hello everyone. I chose a wonderful name for myself: Charlotte, because it sounds like (similiar to) my Chinese name. I am looking forward to improve my English here, because I might have to use it when I would travel all around the world. I also work in the Export Trade (branch), so I am dying to do something about my poor English and I hope you guys can get what you want too.
Not bad at all! I perfectly understood what you were saying.
Do remember interpunction rules; after using a comma or a dot you always write a space, just like I do. Don't forget to use capital letters when you start a new sentence too! Also, the word ''I'' is always written with a capital letter.
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