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27 Feb, 2012
On Last fFriday, iI went to my friend's open house party. => Last Friday, I went to my friend's open-house party.
It was a new experience and it was very interesting. => It was a new experience and it was very interesting => It was a new and interesting experience.
Because It was a potluck party., and all the guests were foreigners except for me.,
So, I must spoken speak English~ => Because it was a potluck party, and all the guests were foreigners except for me, I must speak English => It was a potluck party, and since all of the other guests were foreigners, I needed to speak in English.
It's was difficult.. bBut, I tried. => It was difficult, but I tried.
When they talked with to me, they were considerate about towards me. => When they talked to me, they were considerate towards me.
It's was very nice. And they are were very kindly~~ => It was very nice. And they were very kind.
I enjoyed the party thanks to them => Thanks to them, I enjoyed the party.감사합니다! ^^
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
hHello! => Hello!
I'm yYoshihisa,_a man,I'm male and I'm 19 years old. => I'm Yoshihisa. I'm male and I'm 19 years old.
As you can see,_I have been learning English. => As you can see, I have been learning English.
To explain why I learn English,_I want to make friends from all over the world. => The reason I'm learning English is because I want to make friends from all over the world. =>> I am studying English in order to make friends from all over the world.
And I think English is the world's most popular language . => And I think English is the world's most popular language =>> And I believe English is the most widely used language in the world.
So,I think that Iif I_master English,_I will be able to communicate with an amazing number of people. => So I think that if master English, I would be able to communicate with an amazing number of people
In a summeary, Please please be my friend!! => In summary, please be my friend!
Thank you for your reading. => Thank you for reading!
<em>Hope you find this helpful, and that you make a lot of friends! ^^</em>0 votedFebruary 27, 20120LEGEND:
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my little history => A short introduction
hHello. => Hello
mMy name is Marcos and I am from Chile, in the 9th Region, of Lautaro. => My name is Marcos and I am from Chile, in the 9th Region of Lautaro.
I am superior technical <em>(Do you mean a senior technician?)</em> in telecommunications and telematicatelematics but work in on metal structures with my father. => I am a senior technician in telecommuncations and telematics but I work on metal structures with my father.
I have am 23 years old age,. I like camping, the nature, and cicling of mountaincycling. => I am 23 years old. I like camping, nature and mountaincycling.
And I want to learn English as a personal challenge. => And I want to learn English as a personal challenge =>> And I am studying English to challenge myself.HOPE I HELPED! ^^
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Today's diary: Diligence rules! (click me~:D)
One of my closest friends brought me a happy news. ==> One of my closest friends shared some good news.
He actually had gotten admissions from all of the five universities that he'd applied to. ==> He got admitted to all five universities that he applied to!
I was much more excited to hear that because I knew how hard he'd worked out for entering in. <em>(당신는 친구보다 더 행복했어요?) ==> </em>I was more excited than he was to hear that because I knew how hard he worked to get into those universities.
He'd been gone through annoying mathematical formulas, exasperating stacks of books, other peoples' stinking looks towards him (because it seemed to him that it's pratically impossible for him) when he'd been preparing for the exam. <em>Did other people look at him like he couldn't succeed?</em> ==> He had gone through annoying mathematical formulas, millions of books and the disbelieveing stares of others who doubted that he would succeed while he was preparing for his exams.
We'd talked about a lots of stuffs today in a restaurant with stacks of freshly-pressed meals. <em>I personally don't know what freshly-pressed meals mean. Did you mean freshly prepared? ==> </em>We talked about a lot of things today while we were in a restaurant that served freshly-made meals.
Anyway I was so happy to hear the news and it could be a motive for me to study harder! ==> Anyway, I was so happy to hear the news. This motivated me to study harder!- Any comments and advices would be welcomed! Including title! - ==> <em>I wholeheartedly agree with the title ^^</em>
And if there're any expressions sound weird, please let me know better one!Thanks a million! XD ==> 아니요, 저는 당신을 "감사합니다" 말해야 돼요. ^^
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